Charmaine Chircop Poet Free verse

I'Ve Loved Moons That Did Not Glow,Before

My Beloved,

It doesn't matter

 If it is I who comes  to you

or if its you who comes to me

All that  matters

 is to be with you

All that matters

Is to love me true

Cause I' ve loved moons

that did not glow, before

And I loved stars

that did not shine

I drew two hearts 

on sun-kissed sands

One heart was washed-out 

 by the night ~tide.

I lit a candle in silent winds

but has been smothered

by fog and mist

A dreadful sea-foam

stole my pearled sails

and with it

each endearing bliss

My Beloved,

I do know the trade of roses

for the crimson that thorns bleed

I embraced the  pang  of absence

when warmed eyes were not to meet

My Beloved,

It doesn't matter

If it is I who comes to you

Or if its you who comes to me

All that matters

is to always find each other

Cause our love is meant to be.
  

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Tim Smith February 4, 2016 at 2:35 PM Rereading one of my favorite poems : ).....so so beautiful.

Tim Smith November 27, 2015 at 1:35 PM Reading some of my favorite poems. I absolutely love this one.

Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2015 at 8:25 AM You have a unique way of expressing yourself, I enjoy it.

Ovidiu Bocsa December 9, 2014 at 12:36 PM Un grande amore e un grande amore E luna e una,The moon is just one ,but it has many faces>That is why Juliet asked Romeo not to swear on moon.Gorgeous images of shinning feeling ,at first kept hidden in the secret chamber.The presence is absent:sometimes and the absence is present:sometime.Life embraced all in its breath>too hot,too cold,but never enough.Best wishes,O.B.

Maurice Yvonne November 25, 2014 at 9:18 PM Romantic, streams calm against the wind the rage of jutting rocks and every word another crest of luscious waves of love.

Terrell Martin November 25, 2014 at 9:03 PM So glad to have found another true poet...love this lovely interlude. Peace my new friend, Terry

Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 6:28 AM truly golden pen charmaine very beautifully painted piece dear friend

Andrea Dietrich November 24, 2014 at 5:55 PM charma, I do not know anybody who writes a love poem like you do. You just have a special ability along those lines. I can actually be in love and not even think to do something like this!!

Jack Ellison November 24, 2014 at 4:01 PM What can I say... I am in the presence of greatness! Love and hugs XXX

Sebastian Aaron Baez November 24, 2014 at 3:12 PM I'm packing my bags and buying my ticket right now! :) Dancing with romance and giving love a chance something that was made to last.....Very beautiful write Charmaine.

Faye Gibson November 24, 2014 at 3:01 PM I am loving this...beautiful,

Sandip Goswami November 24, 2014 at 1:57 PM I am sure that you are trying to write a romantic epic...I enjoy your love...Where is your husband ? Does he read the epic by his better half? Best wishes to you from my warm-blooded heart... Charmaine Chircop November 24, 2014 at 4:04 PM Yes..the man in my life,my soulmate reads it.Thanks for your soooo kind comment.You are a true friend!!!!!!

Earl Schumacker November 24, 2014 at 11:31 AM Hi Charmaine, This has the purity and flow of angels on the wing souring over the warm winds of mountains. Well executed and delivered. Very meaningful also. Great job. Loved it! Earl

James Fraser November 24, 2014 at 10:31 AM Dreamy to dreamier Charmaine. Love the title, so apt in my past. This style is all yours, one must find a name for it, James :) xx

Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2014 at 9:38 AM This is sweet romance. A very effective use of the repeating lines.

Eileen Manassian November 24, 2014 at 7:53 AM Oh Charma....Oh OH OH OH!!! OH...how pretty! Who can write with such whimsy and love and passion but you! :) Loved it from start to finish.

Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 10:43 PM How beautiful, passionate, and loving. You are any mans dream..straight to the heart and my favs ,...hugs Coach

David Meade November 23, 2014 at 9:11 PM The love portrayed here is passionate, enduring, and seeking . . . a very sacred type of love. It's a type of love we all desire to have . . . well done, my good friend.