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I'Ve Loved Moons That Did Not Glow,Before

My Beloved, It doesn't matter If it is I who comes to you or if its you who comes to me All that matters is to be with you All that matters Is to love me true Cause I' ve loved moons that did not glow, before And I loved stars that did not shine I drew two hearts on sun-kissed sands One heart was washed-out by the night ~tide. I lit a candle in silent winds but has been smothered by fog and mist A dreadful sea-foam stole my pearled sails and with it each endearing bliss My Beloved, I do know the trade of roses for the crimson that thorns bleed I embraced the pang of absence when warmed eyes were not to meet My Beloved, It doesn't matter If it is I who comes to you Or if its you who comes to me All that matters is to always find each other Cause our love is meant to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/4/2016 2:35:00 PM
Rereading one of my favorite poems : ).....so so beautiful.
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Date: 11/27/2015 1:35:00 PM
Reading some of my favorite poems. I absolutely love this one.
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Date: 6/2/2015 8:25:00 AM
You have a unique way of expressing yourself, I enjoy it.
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Date: 12/9/2014 12:36:00 PM
Un grande amore e un grande amore E luna e una,The moon is just one ,but it has many faces>That is why Juliet asked Romeo not to swear on moon.Gorgeous images of shinning feeling ,at first kept hidden in the secret chamber.The presence is absent:sometimes and the absence is present:sometime.Life embraced all in its breath>too hot,too cold,but never enough.Best wishes,O.B.
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Date: 11/25/2014 9:18:00 PM
Romantic, streams calm against the wind the rage of jutting rocks and every word another crest of luscious waves of love.
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Date: 11/25/2014 9:03:00 PM
So glad to have found another true poet...love this lovely interlude. Peace my new friend, Terry
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Date: 11/25/2014 6:28:00 AM
truly golden pen charmaine very beautifully painted piece dear friend
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Date: 11/24/2014 5:55:00 PM
charma, I do not know anybody who writes a love poem like you do. You just have a special ability along those lines. I can actually be in love and not even think to do something like this!!
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Date: 11/24/2014 4:01:00 PM
What can I say... I am in the presence of greatness! Love and hugs XXX
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Date: 11/24/2014 3:12:00 PM
I'm packing my bags and buying my ticket right now! :) Dancing with romance and giving love a chance something that was made to last.....Very beautiful write Charmaine.
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Date: 11/24/2014 3:01:00 PM
I am loving this...beautiful,
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Date: 11/24/2014 1:57:00 PM
I am sure that you are trying to write a romantic epic...I enjoy your love...Where is your husband ? Does he read the epic by his better half? Best wishes to you from my warm-blooded heart...
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/24/2014 4:04:00 PM
Yes..the man in my life,my soulmate reads it.Thanks for your soooo kind comment.You are a true friend!!!!!!
Date: 11/24/2014 11:31:00 AM
Hi Charmaine, This has the purity and flow of angels on the wing souring over the warm winds of mountains. Well executed and delivered. Very meaningful also. Great job. Loved it! Earl
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:31:00 AM
Dreamy to dreamier Charmaine. Love the title, so apt in my past. This style is all yours, one must find a name for it, James :) xx
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Date: 11/24/2014 9:38:00 AM
This is sweet romance. A very effective use of the repeating lines.
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Date: 11/24/2014 7:53:00 AM
Oh Charma....Oh OH OH OH!!! OH...how pretty! Who can write with such whimsy and love and passion but you! :) Loved it from start to finish.
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Date: 11/23/2014 10:43:00 PM
How beautiful, passionate, and loving. You are any mans dream..straight to the heart and my favs ,...hugs Coach
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Date: 11/23/2014 9:11:00 PM
The love portrayed here is passionate, enduring, and seeking . . . a very sacred type of love. It's a type of love we all desire to have . . . well done, my good friend.
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