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I'Ve Lost My Rabbit

I went to check my rabbit hutch
The bunny wasn't there
I searched around for hours
Found it on the rocking chair 

Jan Allison
7th September 2014

Thanks to James Fraser for the inspiration:-)

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014

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Dorian Petersen Potter

September 24, 2014 at 12:24 PM

Very cute one Jan! Lol. ...I love rabbits, the one in Alice in Wonderland is my favorite fictitious one! Lol... You're so much fun my friend! Love and Light! Warm hugs back to you! Xxxx D.

September 24, 2014 at 12:29 PM

my rabbit poems are fictitious too in every way LOl hugs Jan xxx

September 18, 2014 at 2:49 PM

When is a rabbit,not a rabbit. Lol....Seren

September 18, 2014 at 2:49 PM

When its got batteries LOL :-) Hugs Jan xxx

September 12, 2014 at 3:53 PM

Nice fun rabbit poem, Jan! Will never look at rabbits the same after reading Watership Down. hugs // paul

September 12, 2014 at 5:56 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Paul. Oh Watership down - i just have to hear Bright Eyes and I get tears:-( hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

September 9, 2014 at 8:01 AM

Cute, I'm glad he was safe.

September 9, 2014 at 10:43 AM

Thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan x

Vincent Flannery

September 8, 2014 at 1:43 PM

Nice little ditty Jan. Enjoyed it much. Thank you for your comment. Most of my poems, I feel, are inspired. But The Tour Group was totally inspired. This line popped in my head. And with your comment, I know it was meant for you to see. Have a great trip!

September 8, 2014 at 1:56 PM

sometimes you are just meant to read a poem Vincent - something draws you to read it - I read one today - and I was mentioned it along with some other 'soupe'r friends ! Hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

September 8, 2014 at 8:01 AM

I see many many rabbits along my route every night. Love and prayers for you, Gina

September 8, 2014 at 10:37 AM

Thanks Gina for your lovely comment:-) hugs Jan xx

September 8, 2014 at 2:31 AM

Oh, and also. I hear that the bunny is sweet just like you and they call her a honey bunny. Jim Horn

September 8, 2014 at 7:45 AM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems/unholy Now do a search on honey bunny and see if you come up with yourself like I did. Jim Horn

September 8, 2014 at 7:39 AM

Aww you are too kind Jim:-) hugs jan xx

September 8, 2014 at 2:28 AM

You forgot part of it: After looking everywhere with despair. We have several wild rabbits running here, there and everywhere at RiverSea Plantation, in Bolivia, NC. Jim Horn

September 8, 2014 at 7:38 AM

Thanks Jim :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 7, 2014 at 9:21 PM

So then the rocking chair became a rocking hair.

September 8, 2014 at 1:07 AM

Ha Ha Ha I LOVE it Brenda! Hugs Jan xxx

September 7, 2014 at 6:59 PM

Do you have a pet rabbit? Someone in my building used to have one. I have had tropical fish, lizards, a cat named Bilbo and now am the proud owner of an electric fish tank. The plastic fish swim by when I turn it on and I do not have to feed them. Enjoyable ode. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

September 8, 2014 at 1:06 AM

I don't have any rabbits Matthew it is purely a fun write:-) Hugs Jan xx

September 7, 2014 at 1:37 PM

the battery companies should be paying you for all the promotion you are doing for them. all the same Great Poem. by the way thank you for your mail to me. those are great pictures you sent me. there was nothing left to the imagination. and boy is your rabbit ever so photogenic. Cheers.

September 8, 2014 at 3:54 AM

Lol

September 7, 2014 at 1:39 PM

BEHAVE Maurice LOL - the inspiration for this cute little number came from James ... I just added the words in the right order LOL Hugs Jan xxx

September 7, 2014 at 1:00 PM

Ha ha! a rabbit hutch will never seem the same again. But I'm so glad you found it, James ;-)

September 7, 2014 at 1:02 PM

Thanks for the inspiration James LOL :-) Hugs Jan xxx

September 7, 2014 at 12:23 PM

LOL.....oh my...Jan BEHAVE.....hugs Tim

September 7, 2014 at 12:37 PM

No retraction needed...just more hugs :)

September 7, 2014 at 12:35 PM

Retraction required or I need an extra hug - up to you LOL :-) Hugs Jan xxx

September 7, 2014 at 12:32 PM

Yes..lol..I just went and read his comment...well I do declare :)....hugs Tim

September 7, 2014 at 12:28 PM

*** innocent face*** I can thank James for the inspiration Tim... I always am well behaved ;-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 7, 2014 at 12:19 PM

- Sooo cute, Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

September 7, 2014 at 12:27 PM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xxx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

September 7, 2014 at 11:02 AM

Fine. BUNNY ROCKS. Jan, your rabbit is really lost. You won't get back her bunny-self again. So take care.... Nice poem indeed. Hugs. RAJAT

September 7, 2014 at 11:04 AM

Thanks Rajat nothing more distressing than a lost rabbit:-) Hugs Jan xx

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