I'Ve Begun

I've begun,
 I've surpassed.
I'm surprised, I could last. 
I've passed.

 Wait a sec...
I've woken up, it's a trap.
The load hasn't vanished.

 Let me fall back asleep, 
so my purity - I can keep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hawkens Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Oh, to be lost in our dream world. Wonderful poem.
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March 7, 2019 at 8:40 PM
I love it :)
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