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Itty Bitty, Achy-Breaky Heart

time spent together great love for me itty bitty to him he now dates only married women my heart sealed in a jar best friend asked if this was a drain no drain, my dear it’s a sewer
*Written April 15, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/26/2014 6:26:00 PM
I am glad you are over him - he didn't deserve you. Great write!
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:18:00 PM
Sorry to hear this is a true story. Some men are a waste of space. I'm glad you are stronger than him.
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Date: 4/15/2014 4:37:00 PM
HE definitely smells like the sewer. You deserve much better...hugs Tim
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/16/2014 3:11:00 PM
Indeed he was (and probably still is) a stinker. I'm over it. Haven't desired to be "in love" since though. There is a higher love that beckons.
Date: 4/15/2014 2:09:00 PM
Pretty good and strong write Carolyn!! You tackled heartache with lots of dignity, considering everything :) // paul
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