David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

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Shaped Haiku 2 Poetry Contest
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07/14/25

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much said little done                                    |
when a spider’s hanging dead                       /
from a web half spun  __________________/
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Duke Beaufort July 17, 2025 at 4:27 PM David, this is really impressive. You even included eight legs! It's a very striking image and set of words. Hope you are well! Smiles!! David Kavanagh July 18, 2025 at 2:15 AM Hey there Duke, The eight legs were very important, people may have mistook it for an insect or something weird otherwise lol! Thanks so much, cheers David

Sara Kendrick July 17, 2025 at 2:38 PM Congratulations on your winning work in this creative contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K David Kavanagh July 18, 2025 at 2:12 AM Thanks Sara, I’m not sure about my imagery talents lol! But the haiku itself is not bad all things considered, cheers David

thriveni c mysore July 16, 2025 at 9:00 PM There is so much thinking and effort in this shape dear poet. amazing. Congratulations on your win, cheers!!! David Kavanagh July 17, 2025 at 1:37 AM Thank you Thriveni, it’s great when they come together and fall apart at the same time, (as in the web) cheers David

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2025 at 10:32 AM cute ku indeed. Congrats David Kavanagh July 16, 2025 at 3:23 PM Thanks Andrea, that spider was a bit dodgy to sketch lol! Cheers David

Ghairo Daniels July 16, 2025 at 10:31 AM Very very unusual : one seldom sees a sad haiku. Well done, however sad for spider, David. David Kavanagh July 16, 2025 at 3:22 PM I suppose nature can be pretty sad at times Ghairo, I try to express it abstractly as only us humans can do, cheers David

Crystol Woods July 16, 2025 at 9:54 AM Just... how?! How did this even come to mind!? It's very cool! The haiku wasn't left wanting either...I'm impressed! Xo David Kavanagh July 16, 2025 at 3:19 PM Heya Crystol, the haiku itself was abstract thinking, the imagery was trial and error lol! Thanks so much, I’m delighted it impressed you, cheers David

Trina Layne July 16, 2025 at 7:05 AM Congrats, David! David Kavanagh July 16, 2025 at 3:14 PM I’m delighted Trina that this one got a placement, cheers David

sara Etgen-Baker July 15, 2025 at 4:06 PM what patience you had in creating this poem with its image. Well done, sir. David Kavanagh July 16, 2025 at 3:13 PM Thanks so much Sara, was a labour of love lol! Cheers David

Daniel Henry Rodgers July 15, 2025 at 10:06 AM Hello David, first of all, it must have taken you a while to create the image, and I certainly love the words. My wife and I came home from vacation several weeks ago, and she suddenly was terrified to see the shadow of a Bat through one of our curtains. After doing my usual routine to get a bat out of the house, I noticed he was not budging. I looked, and here he had died and was dried and stiff. Starved, I take it. Summer Blessings, My Friend, Daniel David Kavanagh July 15, 2025 at 11:35 AM Heya Daniel, thanks so much for your encouraging words; I can just imagine the silhouette of the bat through the curtains, A signal from Alfred the butler perhaps lol! You know trying to sketch a spider using characters alone is no mean task, hopefully I get a placement for my efforts, cheers David

Lin Lane July 14, 2025 at 4:10 PM I’d like to see Little Miss Muffet take a seat beside it. Before you sprayed it. David Kavanagh July 15, 2025 at 12:07 AM Ha! That’s actually a very good idea Lin, but probably out of my artistic league using characters alone, I don’t think I’ve ever sprayed a spider, only invasive wasps and ants lol! Cheers David

Jan Allison July 14, 2025 at 12:37 PM clever poem and picture David - I much prefer to see a wily wasp in the web instead - just trying to get pest control to remove a wasps nest - the likkle buggers have invaded our bird box! hugs jan xx David Kavanagh July 14, 2025 at 12:48 PM Heya Jan, I did a DIY job on a wasps nest in a vent near my bathroom a few weeks ago, half tin of spray killed the lot of them, best of luck getting rid of yours, cheers David