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Itsy-Bitsy Mouse

itsy
bitsy
teeny
weeny
There once was an itsy-bitsy mouse
Who lived in a teeny-weeny house...

She had a teeny-weeny spouse
Who was an itsy-bitsy louse

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Heidi Sands Date: 7/15/2019 4:00:00 PM Another form, I haven't done. I enjoyed this sweet poem :) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 7/15/2019 5:12:00 PM Great to hear, Heidi. It had the desired effect. Feedback always helps me, so thanks for yours. Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier Date: 7/14/2019 9:50:00 PM LOL so cute, Gershon. Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 7/14/2019 10:34:00 PM Cute, but sharp lies the edge of the knife between the lines. LOL. Thanks, Line! :) gw

Sandra Adams Date: 7/14/2019 8:25:00 PM this is cute....not familiar with the form but guessing you use 4 words to build off of...kind of witty like a limerick! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 7/14/2019 8:44:00 PM Exactly right. You build off of four rhymed adjectives, although there can be two different rhymes. As for the limerick effect, that's a bit of a gw insignia, truth be told. Thanks for the feedback, Sandra. Much appreciated. Best wishes, gw