It's Your Reflection

Just leave behind your paint-by-number days
Move in to your reflection in my eyes
I'll finger paint my love over your grey
So all your daydreams will be colorized

I'll paint a world beyond your wildest dream
With colors undefined on any chart
You'll find with me, no mundane color scheme
Each stroke, I'll add more depth to your fine art

And after each day we will paint the night
The hues in all your dreams will blend with mine
Imagination sparks, then love ignites
Exploding fireworks as our dreams entwine

These eyes are radiant because of you
Your beauty is reflected in my view 


         (fireworks 2 syllables)
          by Daniel Turner
My response to Nicola's Radiant Eyes.


Radiant Eyes


Radiant eyes, you haunt my dreams,
And ignite imagination.
Piercing gems, a hint of moonbeams,
Spark my quest for exploration.

Just like a lighthouse, at night, they gleam
And guide me to your loving arms.
Your love and strength govern supreme,
And protect me from daylight harms.

But soon, the earth, in all her schemes,
Pulls me from salvation.
At dawn’s early rise, I am, it seems,
Bled of sweet intoxication.

Oh radiant eyes, where do you go,
When the nightmare of morn has begun?
I try to forget, but the soul with the glow
Lingers ’til I come undone.

Hours are so long, when will I see you
In the waking light of day?
Colour my world with your radiant hue
And end my nightmare grey.

    by Nicola Byrne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Parker Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Excellent opening line, then to use color as the binding thread through out the poem is genius..good work
Daniel Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 7:06 AM
Oh wow! You are continuing your lovely sonnet responses to Nicola:) superb, Daniel:) love that final couplet - an undeniable 7:)
Manassian Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 5:39 AM
Oh WOW! This is splendid. I see where the inspiration came form. Such a lovely matching poem. Beautiful...both the original and the response.
Cheyney Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Cool poem
Turner Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Thank you, Jolene:)
Teagan Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 9:58 PM
I love this ! "I'll finger paint my love over your grey So all your daydreams will be colorized" This is such a nice response poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Merry Christmas, Daniel
Turner Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Thank you, Becca. So nice to see your lovely smile:) Merry Christmas young lady:)
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December 24, 2016 at 3:22 PM
I don't normally see replies to my comments but I happened to catch your question on coming back to this poem. He just calls me Andrea, "Hon" or Anne sometimes. My stepdad called me Andie. It surprises me nobody else ever did. Just a few from time to time!! NOT DRAY. hahaha It rhymes with my silly middle name RAE
Turner Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 10:35 AM
soupmail sent:)
Gupta Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Passionate response ... Wonderful Sonnet ... Great writes ... Great time ...
Turner Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Probir, sir. I think you are an extraordinary poet. You see things in a very unique and colorful way. Thank you for your support. Merry Christmas and happy New Year:)
Kannan Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 5:32 AM
Lovely response... A 7... Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year...
Turner Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Thank you young lady, I appreciate all the support you have shown me over this past year. Merry Christmas and a happy prosperous New Year to you, Supraja:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 10:30 PM
Wow!!! I am just in awe of both of these passionate pieces! You have me floating above the clouds! These brought me great joy and I thank you both! Blessings, Connie : ) 7
Turner Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Thank you Mrs Connie:) Merry Christmas!
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December 23, 2016 at 7:35 PM
This is why I go too often on breaks at work just to read amazing poems like yours Daniel. Just beautiful!!!! :)
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Akkina, when I think of beauty, all I can think of is your beautiful smile, Just gorgeous! Thank you for your kindness. Merry Christmas and God bless:)
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 7:21 PM
wow, DAniel, this is one of the better responses to someone's poem that I have seen here at soup. No I will rephrase that. One of the BEST. You really responded beautifully in your sonnet. I loved it. SEVEN
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 8:04 PM
Thank you, Andrea. What does your husband call you Dray? Draya? Andie? I want to call you Andie:) Merry Christmas, Andie:)
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December 23, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Beautiful, moving, skillfully-written, Daniel! Love it. Janice
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 8:02 PM
Thank you, Janice:0 Have a safe and happy holiday.
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December 23, 2016 at 2:40 PM
- A wonderful poem, Daniel - Best wishes for a Merry Christmas - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. i hope you have a wonderful holiday. Try to stay out of trouble:)
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December 23, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Great response to Nicola's poem, Daniel. I think it is wonderful when one person can ignite inspiration in another. // Barry.
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 2:38 PM
Thank you, Barry. Yes, me too:) I've been lucky enough to have been inspired by many poets here in the soup. There are just so many good writers here. It's hard not to feel inspired. Merry Christmas, Barry and God bless:)
Smith Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Very lovely my friend ...you are very good with you echos
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 1:46 PM
Thank you, Tim. Merry Christmas my friend:)
Sands Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Wow really, nice Daniel. Great response! :)
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 12:42 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Merry Christmas:)
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:50 AM
oh WOW Daniel what a wonderful romantic response to Nicola's poem I love it when people are inspired to write having read the work of another:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:56 AM
We now have a series, starting with her, "Someone Like You" my responses, "If I Were The One For Nicola", "Within Her Heart", "A Distant Love". Then she wrote,"Come Find Me Under Moonlight" my response,"I Found You In The Moonlight",Then her,"Radiant Eyes" and this response. They make a wonderful love story in poetry. Thank you for kindness, Jan:) Merry Christmas!
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December 23, 2016 at 11:40 AM
What a great poem volley! I had not read her poem before and it is beautiful, so to is yours equally beautiful. Both are ultra romantic and make one want to swoon into an embrace and kiss so I have to go now. Two Wow poems ... CayCay
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:50 AM
We now have a series, starting with her, "Someone Like You" my responses, "If I Were The One For Nicola", "Within Her Heart", "A Distant Love". Then she wrote,"Come Find Me Under Moonlight" my response,"I Found You In The Moonlight",Then her,"Radiant Eyes" and this response. They make a wonderful love story in poetry. Thank you for your treasured visits:)
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December 23, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Absolutely iridescent Daniel! Of course I'm a color junkie, but that makes your sonnet explode my into senses like grandpa's shine poured from a mason jar. Well, something like that. The title reminded me of the sage who once said: "Young man, beware the woman who looks into your eyes and says, "I adore you." She is talking to her reflection." cheers and chuggalugs! ~ j
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Just be careful where you scratch:) Thanks John. Making you laugh is a wonderful Christmas present for me:)
Smith Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Well done Daniel, Merry Christmas...
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Thank you, Charlie. Merry Christmas:)
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