Patience

patience has run out the truth any truth posted on March 22, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/22/2018 8:52:00 PM

Wow! These words, especially the dramatically perfect last line, can be applied to any situation, Line, from court case to domestic spat, to simmering bone of contention...Wonderful! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2018 9:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Niall Fulham

Date: 3/22/2018 7:20:00 PM

Hi Line , very nice well chosen words ::)) Hugs~~Niall

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2018 9:32:00 PM

Thank you, Niall. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2018 7:04:00 PM

I really like this one and how you ended it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2018 9:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Much appreciated.