It's Their Graduation

It's their graduation
                                       In just a few short weeks!
                                       I'm so proud of my friends
                                       Independent bright teens
                                       Indeed, they will make an
                                       Impact on this vast world 
                                       I wish them all the best.

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/30/2022 9:34:00 PM

What a nice wish Anna for your friends God bless you for having a generous soul...

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 10/22/2022 7:49:00 PM

Awe thank you so much, Michael =) I appreciate you stopping by and commenting <3

Bill Baker

Date: 9/15/2022 4:03:00 PM

Nice tribute to the children of friends, Anna. Well written in form. Bill

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 9/17/2022 9:32:00 PM

Thank you! I am so very proud of them. =)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2022 5:43:00 PM

Great style of poetry to feature them.

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 9/8/2022 8:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/30/2022 2:05:00 PM

A very nice piece for those who've worked to get their diploma. Let's hope they can solve some of the world's problems; I always hope that for each new generation. Well penned.

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 6/14/2022 2:38:00 PM

Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your comment. I know they will make a difference in this world. =) ~Blessings to you. <3

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/10/2022 2:25:00 AM

Nice dedication, Love the positivity of the poetry. Harry

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 5/11/2022 1:45:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/8/2022 12:11:00 PM

Now the fun is over and repayment terms come due . . . . Aloha!

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 6/14/2022 2:36:00 PM

Not necessarily. The fun is not over. They're starting a new adventure; another door is opening for them. Though they will have more responsibilities. They can still have fun in life, you just got to look on the bright side, and keep on smiling through rain or shine. =D

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2022 8:12:00 PM

Yes. It's great seeing young men and women sallying forth into the world, esp. if they don't have the jaded views of their elders. Huzzah! :) gw

Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 5/7/2022 8:48:00 PM

Indeed! I'm so proud of them! I graduated last year and I'm blessed to have loved ones around me to help guide me on this journey of life. ~Blessings to you