Jan Allison Poet Quatrain

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It's the Night Before Christmas

Presents piled beneath the tree
all are wrapped so skillfully
Santa’s bringing me a pup
how will Santa wrap him up!

November or December Quatrain Poem Poetry Contest

Rhyme scheme AABB

Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

11/18/21

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Jennifer Proxenos November 21, 2021 at 9:25 AM Oh this is sooooooooooooo cute my friend. Hope you do get a puppy for Christmas! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Delice Arleen Skelly November 21, 2021 at 2:04 AM Very nice indeed...Delice

Lindsay Laurie November 20, 2021 at 8:05 PM Hello Jan ... hope there's a nappy on the pup - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Debra L Brown November 20, 2021 at 5:07 PM Jan, This is cute! The picture is priceless! Good luck in the contest! Blessing~ Debbie

Jack Horne November 20, 2021 at 12:17 PM LOL, such a cute one here : )

Rico Leffanta November 19, 2021 at 10:08 AM I hope his elves warned him it is, "Pup-pee" . . . . . . Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:44 PM lol you are so funny Rico:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile November 19, 2021 at 4:29 AM This is just adorable Jan! Clever and cuddly, Happy Friday xxoo Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:44 PM aww thanks xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina November 19, 2021 at 4:25 AM I can't imagine how Santa will wrap up the pup, but I'm sure he will have one heck of a ruff ruff time doing it. Love this, Jan. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs // Charlie xx Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:43 PM lol at ruff time xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar November 18, 2021 at 11:02 PM That's a question that requires an answer :) Hugs Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:43 PM One that will never happen in my house lol:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George November 18, 2021 at 9:12 PM This is so cute ! Hope the pupply won't jump off Santa's sleigh ! Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:43 PM Thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf November 18, 2021 at 8:17 PM He'll put him in a loving cup! Season's best, Gershon Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:42 PM cute comment gw :-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet November 18, 2021 at 6:44 PM Jan, you've chosen an adorable subject that is guaranteed to win the affections of readers and jurors everywhere. The final line is just unique. Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:42 PM It was fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May November 18, 2021 at 4:42 PM A lovely present and nicely wrapped up too.. Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:42 PM Thanks Joseph, :-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit November 18, 2021 at 3:35 PM You chose a cute and cuddly theme, Jan that is sure to win readers' ( and judge's) hearts. The ending line is brilliant. Jan Allison November 19, 2021 at 12:41 PM I hope Caren likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham November 18, 2021 at 3:00 PM Would love to see the kids faces on Christmas morning. Love the pic with it. Glad you're over the worst Jan, it's raging in Europe at the moment, Tom Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 3:14 PM Looks like its here to stay:-( just hope the tiredness eases I have read it takes 2 - 3 weeks or longer, hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper November 18, 2021 at 1:54 PM Oh, Jan, I love this verse.. I hope Caren Likes it. Hugs dear friend hope you are doing better. Hugs Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 2:11 PM Thanks Eve I'm very tired but starting to begin to write a little now:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer November 18, 2021 at 1:12 PM an adorable poem with the perfect picture to match! good luck in the contest, jan... Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 1:14 PM Thanks Ilene I've shortened the lines from my original idea but I think this works well:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh November 18, 2021 at 1:00 PM Poor little pup, Santa sure has his work cut out, very cute indeed, cheers David Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 1:14 PM I wrote the poem when I was ill, only one of 2 in about 12 days, but didnt have the inclination to even log on the site till yesterday, hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2021 at 12:52 PM Really cute! Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 1:13 PM thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu November 18, 2021 at 11:28 AM Hello Jan, I think the pup is already wrapped up. the lucky person that receive this gifts. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu November 19, 2021 at 11:45 AM Hello Jan, well I hope that person will get his or her puppy. I would like to have a cat not for Christmas. But i would like to have one. A female. Hugs. Darlene xx Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 11:35 AM Thanks Darlene its pure fiction for me but i know someone who is eagerly awaiting a new pup for Christmas:-) hugs jan xx