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It's the End Either Way

Beg me to forgive you, maybe I won’t Marvel in my ability to see you how you are I’m content in myself I see a hopeless romantic, trapped in emotions bound with passion The good are last -always They are supposed to die young, but they can live to be last as well It’s the end either way It’s terrible to have never loved, this is true, but a life time of losing in love…..? You hand me another Beg me and maybe I won’t Whose heart is on the line here? I’m struggling, desperate not to lose again Make me fit inside your heart, I will stay there Give me feelings and I will feel them, my lines and I will read them But I am made to see the romantic still trapped and still hopeless You’re sorry and you’re forgiven, but the cracks have still been inflicted To go young or to be last? Last….., though it’s the end either way Written in Texas -1 APR 2013

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Date: 9/3/2013 12:28:00 AM
GREAT WRITE UP
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 6/17/2020 1:47:00 AM
So sorry....thank you Alozor. MC
Date: 8/7/2013 1:41:00 PM
I think you should be published ..this is very good. MC ..I am serious.
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Date: 6/17/2020 1:46:00 AM
You are an angel....thank you... MC
Date: 8/7/2013 8:01:00 AM
As humans we do have a tendency to repeat our patterns. Being aware of this can change our trajectory. It is good to look back.
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Date: 8/7/2013 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Rick, great words of wisdom you left me with! MC
Date: 8/6/2013 7:06:00 AM
Hey, thanks for the soupmail. I want to read some of the poems you mentioned in it. Can't recall if this was one you mentioned, but I can see it is dealing with your current situation.This is writing from the heart!
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Date: 8/6/2013 7:47:00 AM
You know Andrea, this one is actually not for the me of now, this is more a tribute to the younger me. Breaking up with someone who feels so bad about making you feel bad that now you're expected to forgive them! "Whose heart is on the line here?" I can see how you thought this dealt with the current -I forgive you..but beg me and maybe I won't...LOL! Thanks! MC
Date: 8/6/2013 2:03:00 AM
Wow this is a bit of a tear jerker,,,,MC. You stirred deep emotions in each line. Amazing write,,,that's written from your heart...~<3 Cherie
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Date: 8/6/2013 5:14:00 AM
Thanks, needless to say, I've been here a couple of times. So happy I was able to capture the emotions felt in a snapshot of a breakup. MC
Date: 8/6/2013 1:27:00 AM
Very strong emotive work....deep questions. Intriguing....
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Date: 8/6/2013 5:12:00 AM
Why thank you Eileen! Question? Ask away, i'm an...open LOL! book! Thanks again! MC
Date: 8/6/2013 12:22:00 AM
Aww,so sad xxx great writing MC, excellent work xx
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Date: 8/6/2013 5:10:00 AM
Thanks you my fair, fair lady...;) xxx MC

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