It's Snowing

I couldn’t believe it when I woke up today
It had snowed and settled and blocked my driveway
A white blanket had covered the whole of my car
So I knew by then that I wouldn’t get far

It had been forecast but we didn’t expect
To get such a downfall like that just yet
It hasn’t snowed like this for some years
But for some it has caused a few tears

Everything stops when the snow is so thick
I was so glad I was off work sick
I wouldn’t have got off the drive today
The white blanket of snow had got in the way 

It was years ago now since the snow fell this way
I haven’t seen as much snow as today
The buses stopped running and the trains stood still
I couldn’t get out coz I live up a hill

The snowflakes were falling like cotton wool balls
I looked out of my window as the snowflakes fall
I was going to build a snowman but I was too tired
After clearing the driveway my energy expired

The snow on the hills looked so wonderfully white
The sky was full and in the night it was still bright
It was just like a scene from a Christmas card
In the morning it was icy and the snow had gone hard

The roads have been gritted but only the main
They even forecast some more snow again
So although it looks like a picture out there
It would be much better if it was elsewhere
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George   Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Pamela with this delightful entry. Love, Lainie
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November 5, 2009 at 3:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Let it Snow Contest Pamela. Love, Carol
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November 4, 2009 at 8:09 PM
What a lovely poem, Pam. and congrats on your win in the Let It Snow contest.. this humorous and light hearted poem I can relate to snows like the one u describe.. living in New Jersey close to New York.. enjoy your moment and thankxxx for this great story... I am honored to be sharing the stage with u as an honorable mention.. keep giving us more to read.. luv it... Linda-Marie
Johnson Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 7:13 PM
This sounds like snow here in our area. It is rare but when it comes it ties up everything. Congratulations on your winner. Joyce
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November 4, 2009 at 6:47 PM
Life can be harder when you live in snow country!! We get all excited in California, if we see a few flakes...little do we know !! Great entry, and a winning poem, Pamela! Congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie
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November 4, 2009 at 6:11 PM
I can relate to times like this here in North Dakota. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Let It Snow contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishings you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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October 22, 2009 at 6:01 AM
Snow is so beautfiul to look at, but i agree with Lena, its when it turns to the gray horrible sludge, it takes away its previous beauty >> James
Pate Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 6:07 PM
And don't you just hate when it turns to grey sludge! However, I loved making snow angels. Your poem brought back many memories from days lived in Michigan. Thanks for the memories!
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