It's Not Enough

Somewhere in Paris, there's someone 
Saying, "I just hate this place so much!"
I thought I'd surely love it here
But now again it's not enough

Somewhere in the Bahamas
Making sure the blinds are drawn
A maid is busy folding sheets
But what she wants is to be gone

It's a burden being restless
To find that great new place to go
Now you're here and stowed your gear
Is it enough, I don't think so 

I'll tell you now, no place is right
If you need some piece of mind
It's not a place, but a person
Your poor heart, aches to find!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/1/2018 4:01:00 PM
So true - I moved about every five years or so til I met my hubby - have been at the same address now for 15 years! This really spoke to me, thank you!
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Date: 6/2/2018 3:36:00 PM
I married twice and gave up. That's when I found "The one". It was seventeen years and at least a dozen states later! I think I just needed to be tempered enough for her.
Date: 5/31/2018 3:38:00 PM
Aww that's a sweet poem! A fave <3
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Pat Adams
Date: 6/1/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Maureen, you are really sweet! (With a couple of dashes of sassy!)
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