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It's Never To Late

Sorrow left him for dead in the gutter Everyone walks by and they see him Their eyes can see him, but their hearts don't Another dreadful morning another night Filled with reckless drinking as a way To cope with his disadvantages So... He gets up and brushes himself off His sight is upon the rising sun And his regret behind the parting moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/18/2017 4:04:00 PM
Morgan, I read your last 4 poems and find this one to stand out. I can feel your emotion of sorrow because you provide details we can relate to. You versed two voices here; the ones who walk by as well as his own. This is a good technique to add to its realism and effectiveness. Your other poems are good, but this one, I feel. Have a great day
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Morgen Farmer
Date: 5/15/2018 3:55:00 PM
Hi Levi, I apologize for the late reply. Thank You for reviewing my previous poems, it means allot. I try to use sorrow as a theme to deliver a message.

Book: Shattered Sighs