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It's Mine All Mine

Hey! Get lost wasp you are a pesky swine
This cherry ice cream is mine ALL mine

You buzz around and make my life hell
Look - this ice cream is for ME it tastes so swell

I need to cool down, gee here it’s really hot
So buzz off pesky wasp or you I will swat

Jan Allison
1st November 2014

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Carol Eastman Date: 11/2/2014 10:58:00 AM Be thankful you don't have a Dragon there... He'd get the wasp his own bowl... then adopt him... Really! LOL Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/2/2014 11:01:00 AM Oh I thought Dragon could roast him and then have some ice cream to cool himself down lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/2/2014 9:06:00 AM ...Ice Cream. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/2/2014 10:25:00 AM I am so glad you added that in the end Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/2/2014 9:05:00 AM Yum, ice cream I'd love to lick your cherry... Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/2/2014 10:52:00 AM I don't get it...But I like cherries too

Paul Callus Date: 11/1/2014 6:21:00 PM "This ice-cream is mine...it's tasting divine!!!" said Jan pointing her finger at a Gozitan wasp! Love your humour, Jan:) There's a special ice-cream parlour in Valletta.....hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/1/2014 6:24:00 PM Oh is there really Paul .... guess I must FORCE myself to visit it tomorrow! Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/1/2014 5:35:00 PM This was a good summer, there were not many wasps. Thanks for the thoughtful note Jan, hugs back to you. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/1/2014 5:38:00 PM I have to admit Richard on the Isle of Man I have only seen one this year - and one in Malta now not that I am complaining I don't like them at all! Hugs Jan and truly I will miss you - stay safe and well until you return my friend - there are too many wonderful people missing from here these days :-( xx

Tim Smith Date: 11/1/2014 2:18:00 PM Be careful he might sting you...lol....hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/1/2014 2:19:00 PM He went off and bothered someone else - I wasn't letting the pesky blighter near my chunks of cherries lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/1/2014 2:04:00 PM I loved your humor in this one Jan! Lol...my favorite line is 4th line of the second couplet. So swell! That's cool. Lol..;) Xxxx D. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/1/2014 2:07:00 PM Thanks Dorian - I have to admit I am working my way through all the different flavours of the delicious ice cream - oh dear the parlour is next door but on to our hotel - but this blooming wasp tried to dive bomb me on our trip out to Gozo today and I wasn't going to let him win! Hugs jan xx