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It's Me

It's me, it's me! I'm not what you say, Can you not see? I do not look that way! No! Please don't go! I swear I'll try harder! Please, don't you know that my thoughts will stray farther? It's so very dark. My stomach is churning. I feel something... A spark? I think that I'm learning! This voice was my friend, It must now meet it's end.

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Date: 11/4/2017 11:13:00 AM
Great first post Ellie... Welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 11/3/2017 10:17:00 PM
Hope and and end, contradiction but real life, well written emotional plea.
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Ellie May Broadstock
Date: 11/4/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, that’s very encouraging ??
Date: 11/3/2017 6:43:00 PM
Very nice write Ellie. Great Rhymes! Welcome to poetry soup! Best, Judy
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Ellie May Broadstock
Date: 11/4/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much! It’s so encouraging to receive a comment so soon! I appreciate it, thank you!

Book: Shattered Sighs