Its M Hands That Are the Enemy

As they look at me with open eyes 
The nerves in me boil inside 
I take my seat and look at my toes 
I feel alone 
I feel exposed 
They pick on me every day 
Every morning I get up and pray 
For a better life and a better day 

Home is worse 
They don’t understand 
About my school 
About my hands ….

My hands are my worst enemy 
They abuse my skin 
With razors and ropes 
With anything 
They hurt me always 
And cause me pain.

Another bad day 
My hands holding tight 
As it makes contact with my skin 
I slowly bite down 
The blood runs out 
And the tears go dry 
As my arms are almost covered 
I slowly start to cry 
My hands are still the enemy 
I can’t ever get them to stop 
As I pray for a better tomorrow 
I rap my arm up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/26/2014 7:51:00 PM
sounds to me like your cutting yourself. there is a lot of this in young girls. people care about you. you have to be kinder to yourself. i am sorry but i am worried about you. you are a wonderful good person.
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Tracey Lawrence
Date: 8/26/2014 7:54:00 PM
im sorry that your worried thats not what i intended to do. but my feelings do take over and its just what im use to.
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