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Its Leaves,Their Griefs

Autumn oak sheds its leaves to live, Birds that thrive in leaves begin to grieve.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 6:51:00 AM

Great work..I enjoyed reading it today..Very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2014 10:44:00 PM

wish this had made the list. It was a very good one.

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/24/2014 10:01:00 AM

I think Parise was looking for one definite poetic feature that is missing here,for instance name of a definite bird would do better than this general canopy"BIRDS":anyway, it is a learning process and I'm sure one day I will be there; congrats on your win once again Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2014 11:24:00 AM

this is very good thinking for the contest. I hope it does very well for you!

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/23/2014 12:03:00 PM

Immense thanks for your visit and encouraging comment Andrea; when you say yes, my spirit say so....huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/22/2014 9:30:00 AM

One of the best I have read so far!

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/22/2014 11:46:00 AM

Thank you Richard, I hope Canada is not too cold by now, wishing you the best of the season....huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2014 2:13:00 PM

A sad time for the birds when their habitat is cold and uninviting..Enjoyed reading your observation of this time of year..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/21/2014 2:12:00 PM

a daily occurrence which you give a certain magic through your great piece, kayod.. huggs

Donna Jones

Date: 11/21/2014 12:32:00 PM

A scene I witness through my window right now....very well done...:-)