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It's In the Details

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it’s in every little thing we did the micro details throughout the day the ones no one would understand these are the moments i miss most i remember my life as mini minute minuscule instants each filled with love for you how now every microscopic beat has me longing for you through warm lingering fog i’m somehow forging my way blessed with the memory of you posted on June 5, 2021

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Date: 6/6/2021 6:24:00 AM
that is so soulful and beautiful. you brought to tears. Awful to lose your soul mate. Recently I have been faced with a lot of friends and family passing on. I told my ex of thirty five years, still my best friend, that he wasn't allowed to leave before me, after all I am four years older. I'm so glad you are able to write and you truly write so beautifully.
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Date: 6/6/2021 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Nancy. It's always a good sign to stay friends with ex's. There's so much in common and so much been shared ~
Date: 6/5/2021 8:35:00 PM
This just tingles. I don't know how else to express the feeling I had reading it. I was tingling with joy, Line. Great write! :) gw
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Date: 6/6/2021 5:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gershon ~
Date: 6/5/2021 9:44:00 AM
Line, beautiful sorrow, love _Constance
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Date: 6/5/2021 10:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Constance. Have a wonderful weekend ~
Date: 6/5/2021 8:20:00 AM
Very beautiful expression of love and separation. Best wishes dear poet.
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Date: 6/5/2021 10:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sanjay ~

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