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It's Blackberries

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It's Blackberries


It's in the thoughts.

It's in the classroom.

It's during recess.

It's in the cafeteria.

It's in the library.

It's waiting for the school bell to ring.

It's the school bus ride home.

It's the tossed school bag on the porch.

It's in Pup-Tart, frolicking ahead.

It's the trail behind the house.

It's in the search.

It's in the anticipation.

It was in the lost.

It's in the found.

It's in the bending down to pluck.

It's in the endless lapping of my face by Pup-Tart!

It's in the holding in my palm.

It's in the look of my gaze.

It's in the tossing into my mouth.

It's in the chewing-bursting sensation.

It's down the throat into the satisfaction of a 50-year-old remembering -- blackberries!!


2022 August 06
*5th Place*
Your Thoughts On Blackberries
~~Matt Caliri: Judged 2022 September 08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 9/9/2022 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! It's a list that's hard to resist, enjoyably inventive. Robert
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/9/2022 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Robert, for your genuine consideration my friend, Aloha William
Date: 9/8/2022 9:53:00 PM
So Nice! So Nice! So Nice. Lovely picture. Black berries taken on hand. Have a good day with black berries. Congratulations
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/8/2022 10:13:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha, for your wondrous sharing my friend, Aloha William
Date: 9/8/2022 2:09:00 PM
Hilo, wonderful poem, I love it and congratulations on your win in the contest _peace and tranquility ~
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/8/2022 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for your sentiments and praise my friend, Aloha William
Date: 9/8/2022 10:47:00 AM
Well done! A unique presentation! Congratulations!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/8/2022 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, for your thoughtfulness my friend, Aloha William
Date: 9/8/2022 9:09:00 AM
Your last lines usually give great punch. This too. Congratulations!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/8/2022 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj, for your highlighted notice my friend, Aloha William
Date: 8/6/2022 3:19:00 PM
Hello Lassad, I enjoy the black berry jam. Also the berries themselves. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/7/2022 10:15:00 AM
Hello Hilo Poet, sorry to get it wrong. Thank you for correcting me. I like the tast of blackberries. They taste just right. Aloha, Darlene
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/6/2022 9:47:00 PM
Hi Darlene, this is William Hilo Poet. Lasaad is Sotto Poet, not to worry as others have done the same thing, my very self included. Yes, love the berries of all varieties. Thanks for dropping a line here my friend, Aloha~William
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