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It's Blackberries

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It's Blackberries


It's in the thoughts.

It's in the classroom.

It's during recess.

It's in the cafeteria.

It's in the library.

It's waiting for the school bell to ring.

It's the school bus ride home.

It's the tossed school bag on the porch.

It's in Pup-Tart, frolicking ahead.

It's the trail behind the house.

It's in the search.

It's in the anticipation.

It was in the lost.

It's in the found.

It's in the bending down to pluck.

It's in the endless lapping of my face by Pup-Tart!

It's in the holding in my palm.

It's in the look of my gaze.

It's in the tossing into my mouth.

It's in the chewing-bursting sensation.

It's down the throat into the satisfaction of a 50-year-old remembering -- blackberries!!


2022 August 06
*5th Place*
Your Thoughts On Blackberries
~~Matt Caliri: Judged 2022 September 08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gorelick Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations on your win! It's a list that's hard to resist, enjoyably inventive. Robert
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 3:04 PM
Thank you, Robert, for your genuine consideration my friend, Aloha William
Dutta Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 9:53 PM
So Nice! So Nice! So Nice. Lovely picture. Black berries taken on hand. Have a good day with black berries. Congratulations
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 10:13 PM
Thank you, Anisha, for your wondrous sharing my friend, Aloha William
La France Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 2:09 PM
Hilo, wonderful poem, I love it and congratulations on your win in the contest _peace and tranquility ~
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Constance, for your sentiments and praise my friend, Aloha William
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Well done! A unique presentation! Congratulations!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 12:21 PM
Thank you, Kim, for your thoughtfulness my friend, Aloha William
Alex Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 9:09 AM
Your last lines usually give great punch. This too. Congratulations!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Christuraj, for your highlighted notice my friend, Aloha William
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Hello Lassad, I enjoy the black berry jam. Also the berries themselves. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 10:15 AM
Hello Hilo Poet, sorry to get it wrong. Thank you for correcting me. I like the tast of blackberries. They taste just right. Aloha, Darlene
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 9:47 PM
Hi Darlene, this is William Hilo Poet. Lasaad is Sotto Poet, not to worry as others have done the same thing, my very self included. Yes, love the berries of all varieties. Thanks for dropping a line here my friend, Aloha~William
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