It Would Take a Million Years

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There's a moment in the morning, when the light is streaming in,
spreading gold upon the pillow, and your hair is like the sun.
I am filled with such emotion, that my heart is overcome.
If I woke you, could I tell you? Could my words be like a song?

    If I woke you, tried to tell you,.. it would take a million years
    So I'll hold you, just to show you,.. when my words have disappeared

There's a moment every morning, when I watch you start the day,
Making toast, or pouring coffee, you'll just take my breath away.
I am struck without a warning, without words that I can find
Do you know the pure devotion, that I carry deep inside?

   When the silence could be broken, all my words will seem to hide 
   There are words I've never spoken.  Do you know how much I've tried?

There's a moment in the evening, when the moon is on the rise.
You'll be looking from the window,. and the stars shine in your eyes.
There's so much that I should tell you.  But, my words have disappeared
There aren't words enough to tell you..., It would take a million years...

     It would take a million years
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Lyric to the music "Homeward Bound"
By William Joseph

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/23/2016 10:42:00 AM
Carrie, beautifully written lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:14:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, well deserved first place....Seren
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:39:00 PM
Hi Carrie. Congrats for your #1 placement in this lyrical verse! ;-)
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Date: 11/20/2015 9:54:00 PM
How lovely Carrie.. such a beautiful song .. Congrats on first place win!
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:03:00 PM
Congrats. SK
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Date: 11/20/2015 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, your lyrics are truly beautiful and deserving of your high placement
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Date: 11/20/2015 5:20:00 PM
Well done Carrie, a beautiful write
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:40:00 PM
These are lovely, romantic and lyrical words that you have penned, Carrie! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, I can see why, well done..a beautiful poem of love expressed.
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:31:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/30/2015 7:10:00 AM
This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!
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Date: 10/21/2015 11:32:00 AM
Carrie, this is so beautiful and dripping with love, I love this 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, call of the wild~~
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Date: 10/21/2015 7:45:00 AM
Great lyrics :)
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Date: 10/20/2015 4:45:00 PM
Memorable song :)
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Date: 10/20/2015 4:29:00 PM
Beautiful, Carrie - so moving it touches my heart and would truly be a great song - maybe it will be someday. It is certainly worthy of discovery by those who could make it happen. Love your words ... CayCay
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