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It Wont Go - Bite Sized 73

When sorrow steals into your heart,
And makes herself a shadowed part,
Of every hour, with pain and strife,
Don’t contemplate ending your life.
Your pain wont go, even in deepest despair.
You will pass your pain to those that care.

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Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/20/2023 9:59:00 AM Excellent truth. Congrats and God bless you with much love, Gina Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/20/2023 9:41:00 PM Thank you Gina, it sure is appreciated. SV

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/20/2023 9:27:00 AM Indeed, SV. This does speak volumes to those in despair and those who care about their family and friends. Well done. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/20/2023 9:41:00 PM Thank you Sam. I do really appreciate your encouraging comments to my poems. Best wishes from SV :)

Sotto Poet Date: 10/13/2023 6:52:00 PM Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear SV Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/20/2023 2:30:00 AM Thank you my dear friend, sorry for the delay in replying.

Brian Sambourne Date: 10/12/2023 8:40:00 PM Six powerful lines with an insightful message about suicide and the lasting pain transference to those left behind. Congratulations on a truth-searing write! Brian Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/20/2023 2:29:00 AM Brian I am so glad this was appreciated. Best wishes & sorry for this reply being so late.

John Hamilton Date: 10/12/2023 2:00:00 PM Very well said, congrats on a nice win! Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/20/2023 2:29:00 AM Thanks so much John & my apology for the delay in responding to your encouraging comment.

Sotto Poet Date: 9/30/2023 7:50:00 PM Reading your wonderful bite size invokes a myriad of captivating and vivid images in my mind, like a mesmerizing tapestry woven with intricate metaphors. The sheer beauty and artistry in the way this piece is written is awe-inspiring Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 9/30/2023 9:37:00 PM G'day, sorry I havent been around to read your poems. I will catch up now, when they go to sleep, I will read. Thanks for your lovely comment. As Dilly said, years ago I wrote a very long poem on this subject, I heard of a friend in hospital and figured it was time to get the message out there. I couldn't remember any of the original, so I made it a 6 liner, incorporating some of the last line of the original. Best wishes my dear friend. SV