It Was the Night

IT WAS THE NIGHT

                          
                We had the spark that turned into fire,
                      like a burning, intense desire.                                     
                 We were together for sixteen years;
                    but our love also brought tears.
                        Tears that filled our eyes,
                      when we said our goodbyes. 

             For many years we did not see each other.
                      Then one night he came over.
                         He kissed me so tenderly.
                 We looked at each other so ardently.

                     Our deep connection relighted.
                     Our passion and desire ignited.
                  The more we looked at each other,
                   the spark we had become hotter.

                     Like a fire, our desire burning
           to feel every muscle of our bodies quivering
                  to hear our breathing and sighing
              to hold, squeeze, clench, touch, feeling
                each other passionately, vehemently
     to keep kissing delicately or with powerful intensity,
             to whiff our scents and smell endlessly    
       and to stare at each other lovingly, affectionately.

                      We caved in to our passion
                 again and again with exhilaration.
       We succumbed to our burning desire so fervently
              like we used to do, but why so quietly?

              There were no words spoken, uttered.
                 Only the look in his eyes asserted  
                  he was saying farewell, goodbye.
                I woke up alone and wondered why.

                 Several months later, I knew why.
         His friend told me he had a heart attack and died
               that time when he came in my dream
                to say his final goodbye that seemed
                  so real sharing me one more night
               of passion and desire that felt so right.
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October 10, 2020 at 12:32 PM
The best thing about this poem was that it had both the elements I was looking for in the contest, the narrative perspective and a beautiful description of the emotions, many congratulations on your win in my contest, I really liked reading your poem, good luck and have a really nice day
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October 10, 2020 at 1:04 PM
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