It Was Never Then

Once there was back when
In the history of “then”
‘Fore the “be” began

In these days of yore
The people lived before, for
There was nothing more

‘Twas a different time
When the latest lagged behind
“Is” had not arrived

None of then’s events
Happened in the present tense
That had not come yet

Language done ‘em in
As their “be,” already been
Never to begin

Now was not "to be"
Then, verbs ended in “-ed”
All done, already

Trapped in simple past
People didn’t sit; they sat 
Didn’t sh_t; they shat

But then’s now’s not when
Life was yesterday to them
It was today back then

We do what we does
Not in history because
Past ain’t what it was
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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April 16, 2024 at 11:31 AM
Dear Robert, the past ain’t what we see in our memory, we do not see things as they were, or how they occurred. Enjoyed this thought provoking read, although I wish we could delete from the past memories we wish we’d never had.. Belle
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April 16, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Thank you Belle. Agreed. Cognitive psychologists who study memory will tell you that virtually all of the events we remember from past either didn't happen as we remember them or they never happened at all. And yes, it would be nice to delete from the past memories we wish we'd never had. Cheers!
Baker Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Very creative poetry, Robert. Nice play on words, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill
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April 12, 2024 at 9:11 PM
Thank you Bill!
Empress Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 3:11 AM
You have a very clever way with words! I love it! Especially those opening lines and also how youv written “ Language done ‘em in As their “be,” already been Never to begin“ excellent and very imaginative! Pleasure reading your work always! Sending you light
Schatz Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 11:34 PM
Thank you Ink Express. I'm always grateful to hear from you...
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 10:37 PM
This would be a cute one to introduce students to the past tense. I love teaching grammar.
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Thanks, Robert
Schatz Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 11:46 PM
Yes. It's fun to over-past stuff. Back then, when things used to happen... I bet you are, were, and will be great grammar teach in all aspects.
Greenhough Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 8:44 AM
Linguistics doesn't always make sense. English is most helpful in poetry though. It is elastic enough to write just about anything. Thank you for giving my brain a whirl.
Schatz Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 8:00 PM
Thank you for your read and feedback Hilda. Always appreciated.
Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:04 AM
Dear Robert, your playful exploration of language and time in is both clever and thought-provoking. You navigate through the intricacies of verb tenses with wit and creativity, unraveling the nuances of past, present, and future. I loved how your poem is a delightful reminder of the ever-changing nature of language and the way it shapes our perception of reality. This is an intriguing reflection on the complexities of communication. - Blessings, Daniel
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April 9, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Thank you Daniel! I so appreciate your (positive) thoughts on the poem. - Blessings back
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