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It Was Hidden In His Lunchbox

I wrote my hubby a little note and this is what it said Be home early tonight, I’ll be waiting in our bed I put it in his lunchbox and sent him on his way Hoping he’d be home early so I would get a lay The day passed by so quickly and I was ready for some action Put on my favourite negligee to spice up the attraction But hubby was nowhere to be seen and I was feeling sad Wondered what had happened – hoped it wasn’t anything bad Hubby came in at normal time by then I wasn’t in the mood Didn’t you find my message I shouted I felt like being rude Message he said what message, and then I explained He looked at me dolefully his face was looking pained He’d put his lunchbox in the fridge and left it there till lunch Grabbed it out the fridge and on sandwiches he did munch His colleague had an identical one I guess they got wrong box Hubby said his mate was like a greyhound of the starting blocks Jan Allison 10th July 2014

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Date: 7/19/2014 4:52:00 AM
I was howling with laughter after I read this! Riotously funny, Jan! Jack C
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Date: 7/19/2014 5:01:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Jack. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/17/2014 2:30:00 PM
Real or made up, it made me chuckle big style Jan, nice one, James :)
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Date: 7/17/2014 2:37:00 PM
Cheers James i am glad you appreciate my humour:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 7/13/2014 6:22:00 AM
So much fun to read, Jan. And I loved the ending. Missed out on the desert that day. I suppose he'll be checking to make sure he has the right lunch box from now on. Really enjoyed it, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 7/13/2014 2:02:00 PM
Hubby doesn't take a lunchbox Robert... but the day I wrote this i had left a note for him in the hall when he got home LOL. Hugs jan xxx
Date: 7/12/2014 6:05:00 PM
Very sweet and funny Jan, nice work! David
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Date: 7/13/2014 2:01:00 PM
Cheers David:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 7/12/2014 6:03:00 PM
OMG that's too funny! Reminds me when my fiancé sent me a text about kissing my toes when he got home from work and his boss came up to him saying " dude, getting a little attached to me are you?" Haha... Hope his colleague had a wife as ready as you. Adorable write sweetie!
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Date: 7/19/2014 5:02:00 AM
LOL Saraj for your comment and your amusing story too:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/12/2014 4:36:00 PM
Lol. :D poor colleague...
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Date: 7/13/2014 2:01:00 PM
LOL Thanks for dropping by Angie:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/12/2014 4:37:00 AM
Lovely poem and great sense of humour best wishes linda
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Date: 7/12/2014 5:16:00 AM
Sadly its made up Linda LOl Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/11/2014 1:38:00 PM
You naughty one you! I'd not just yell at him, I'm give him a smack! ;) Oh....he might like that! Ok Ok...Great write. I loved it. You're my kinda girl. Hey..check out line one in stanza two. Take out got or was...typo! Hugs! Please stay...it seems that we take our turns on this yo yo of happy sad on PS.
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:58:00 PM
amended the poem ... he doesn't eat lunch Eileen BUT I had left a note on the floor when he got in from work yesterday LOL :-) I won't be renewing my PM's Eileen that's is for sure will wait and see if i stay. hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/10/2014 9:03:00 PM
hahahaha. GREAT idea for your poem, Jan. Love it.
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Date: 7/11/2014 3:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea its all Casarah's fault. LOL Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/10/2014 5:24:00 PM
Don't be all blaming me, ya'll the ones thinking my stuff is naughty! haha. Love it Jan, thanks for keeping the smiles coming :-P
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Date: 7/10/2014 5:28:00 PM
YOU started it young lady... I am just following in your footsteps I am mere beginner!!! hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 7/10/2014 4:46:00 PM
lol...OMG...hilarious Jan....hugs Tim xx
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Date: 7/10/2014 4:47:00 PM
I had to put up another one too :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2014 4:47:00 PM
All untrue Tim he doesn't eat lunch LOL am just in a silly mood - its Casarah's fault!

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