Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

It Was Hidden In His Lunchbox

I wrote my hubby a little note and this is what it said
Be home early tonight, I’ll be waiting in our bed
I put it in his lunchbox and sent him on his way
Hoping he’d be home early so I would get a lay

The day passed by so quickly and I was ready for some action
Put on my favourite negligee to spice up the attraction
But hubby was nowhere to be seen and I was feeling sad
Wondered what had happened – hoped it wasn’t anything bad

Hubby came in at normal time by then I wasn’t in the mood
Didn’t you find my message I shouted I felt like being rude
Message he said what message, and then I explained
He looked at me dolefully his face was looking pained

He’d put his lunchbox in the fridge and left it there till lunch
Grabbed it out the fridge and on sandwiches he did munch
His colleague had an identical one I guess they got wrong box
Hubby said his mate was like a greyhound of the starting blocks

Jan Allison
10th July 2014

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Jack Clark July 19, 2014 at 4:52 AM I was howling with laughter after I read this! Riotously funny, Jan! Jack C Jan Allison July 19, 2014 at 5:01 AM Thanks for the comment Jack. Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser July 17, 2014 at 2:30 PM Real or made up, it made me chuckle big style Jan, nice one, James :) Jan Allison July 17, 2014 at 2:37 PM Cheers James i am glad you appreciate my humour:-) Hugs jan xxx

Robert Nehls July 13, 2014 at 6:22 AM So much fun to read, Jan. And I loved the ending. Missed out on the desert that day. I suppose he'll be checking to make sure he has the right lunch box from now on. Really enjoyed it, my friend.... Robert. Jan Allison July 13, 2014 at 2:02 PM Hubby doesn't take a lunchbox Robert... but the day I wrote this i had left a note for him in the hall when he got home LOL. Hugs jan xxx

David Brown July 12, 2014 at 6:05 PM Very sweet and funny Jan, nice work! David Jan Allison July 13, 2014 at 2:01 PM Cheers David:-) Hugs jan xxx

Sarai Virden July 12, 2014 at 6:03 PM OMG that's too funny! Reminds me when my fiancé sent me a text about kissing my toes when he got home from work and his boss came up to him saying " dude, getting a little attached to me are you?" Haha... Hope his colleague had a wife as ready as you. Adorable write sweetie! Jan Allison July 19, 2014 at 5:02 AM LOL Saraj for your comment and your amusing story too:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Angie Thomas July 12, 2014 at 4:36 PM Lol. :D poor colleague... Jan Allison July 13, 2014 at 2:01 PM LOL Thanks for dropping by Angie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Linda Jackson July 12, 2014 at 4:37 AM Lovely poem and great sense of humour best wishes linda Jan Allison July 12, 2014 at 5:16 AM Sadly its made up Linda LOl Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian July 11, 2014 at 1:38 PM You naughty one you! I'd not just yell at him, I'm give him a smack! ;) Oh....he might like that! Ok Ok...Great write. I loved it. You're my kinda girl. Hey..check out line one in stanza two. Take out got or was...typo! Hugs! Please stay...it seems that we take our turns on this yo yo of happy sad on PS. Jan Allison July 11, 2014 at 1:58 PM amended the poem ... he doesn't eat lunch Eileen BUT I had left a note on the floor when he got in from work yesterday LOL :-) I won't be renewing my PM's Eileen that's is for sure will wait and see if i stay. hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2014 at 9:03 PM hahahaha. GREAT idea for your poem, Jan. Love it. Jan Allison July 11, 2014 at 3:09 AM Thanks Andrea its all Casarah's fault. LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance July 10, 2014 at 5:24 PM Don't be all blaming me, ya'll the ones thinking my stuff is naughty! haha. Love it Jan, thanks for keeping the smiles coming :-P Jan Allison July 10, 2014 at 5:28 PM YOU started it young lady... I am just following in your footsteps I am mere beginner!!! hugs Jan xxxx

Tim Smith July 10, 2014 at 4:46 PM lol...OMG...hilarious Jan....hugs Tim xx Tim Smith July 10, 2014 at 4:47 PM I had to put up another one too :) Jan Allison July 10, 2014 at 4:47 PM All untrue Tim he doesn't eat lunch LOL am just in a silly mood - its Casarah's fault!