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It Was Her Poetry Seduced Me

When Thor struck his hammer
upon the flat ground on Earth
it was the pieces withstood the blow we named rock,
constructs we came to know as the mountains.

Even before that time
I crossed my fingers
wished I'd one day experience
...you.

I knew you before heavenly purity  grew wings
before angels blessed hearts 
invoking what we now know as love for our brethren .

I held you in the sphere of my understanding
as the lover I'd never meet but always carry
in the most cherished of my thoughts.

When Zeus handed me his quill and inkwell I knew
I would only use his gift for my inspired notes to you.

Though I was not blessed a poets words 
like Robert Browning 
he who took Elizabeth Barrett into his heart from the first time he read her 
so I did with you.

Only laid blood on parchment
to declare the love you inspired in me.

Like a schoolboy's first kiss
was the day my eyes embraced the body of your work.

Before the first pine broke the ground, the first lark sang,
the first orchards rare enchanted the rainforests. 

Before the first chameleon blended 
into the multicoloured break of dawn.

Before infinite rows of wheat invitingly waved from the fields to greet Hera.

Before liquid rose to separate into
creeks, swamps, rivers, lakes with fish of all kinds
wasn't it me who rode the first seahorse just to make you smile.

Anything, all...
possible 
with the swirl of a letter 
the turn of a word.

I found an immense love tracking the shores of your fine poetry 
always a chill that ran up my back.

No one. 

No one! 

Only you.

Your fine talent,

gifted,

honed

perfected...flaws and all...

moulds

sculpts,

breathes life into ordinary words,

creates poetry 

owns me.


September 26 2016 MY
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ricci Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Good Afternoon Maurice. It was the title that led me to turn the page. Your words are magnificent. Poetry and words can truly reach a soul and spark emotion. I so agree. Be proud of this entry work and expression. Well done entirely. It was an honor to read this entry.
Chircop Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Such a beauty this is..Such a fantastic poem...indeed...A fave
Austin Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 11:09 AM
She is some kind of poet to elicit such profound praise. " I knew you before heavenly purity grew wings." Just an example of many fine lines, Maurice. I can relate to such outpouring. And there is more to it than just words. Love, daver
Manassian Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Amazing write, Armand. I love the the way you affirm your admiration for the poetess you write of. Thanks for your visits to my work.
A   Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 6:13 AM
Like the sun, you rise above others. You are a beast when it comes to writing. I love your pen... can I please borrow your lightingballpoint pen.... Please... Linda
Callus Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Beautiful....what a way to be seduced! Full marks to you, Armand! #7+ Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:21 PM
A fantastic poem, Armand. So glad to see a new one of yours up here today. I am with Jan. I would love to see you riding that sea horse. Sorry you had to read that restaurant poem. I did the whole thing wrong! But I am not redoing it as a rhyme. I wasted to much time on it already! this incredible poem a FAVE
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:16 PM
What an inspirational and romantic write my friend... Hey I saw you on that seahorse Armand - it had 4 legs but 3 dropped off on your journey lol - oh I love that line you wrote such incredible imagery:-) hugs jan xx 7 and faves
Smith Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 6:01 PM
So romantic my friend...beautiful
Turner Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Maurice, I feel the same way about it myself:) Enjoyed your version. Very dramatic poetry!
B. Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Your words by far our my favourite :) I love this poem. A definite fav.
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