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It Was a Good Morning Until

It was a good morning until I got out of bed. Walked into the bathroom and hit my head. Slipped in the shower because I dropped the soap. If you think it got better, the answer is nope. I put on my uniform, grabbed my badge and my purse. Could not find my stethoscope. I am a nurse. My first patient was home but didn’t let me come in. She had decided to choose another company again. My car overheated which of course made me late. The next patient I visited was completely irate. This would not happen to me again the next morning. I hit the snooze button twice, closed my eyes, and kept snoring. 02/14/2021 Written for It Was A Good Morning Until… Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Date: 2/21/2021 9:31:00 AM
The rule of bad things coming in three's was way out of whack for you! Witty, creative and very clever, Evelyn! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/21/2021 5:55:00 AM
Hahaha Evelyn. A great write. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/20/2021 9:48:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, I can see why she hit the snooze button; she had one heck of a day! I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your high placement. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/20/2021 8:32:00 PM
You never know what the day is going to bring. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/20/2021 7:36:00 PM
Evelyn, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest with this wonderfully penned fun poem _Constance
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Date: 2/20/2021 2:53:00 PM
Yup... definitely had days like that. Congrats on your high placement. Terry
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Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/20/2021 2:55:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/20/2021 1:46:00 PM
Bravo, Evelyn. Delightful poem. Congrats on your podium finish ~
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Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/20/2021 2:56:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment.
Date: 2/20/2021 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on winning a trophy with this one, Evelyn. It was such fun to read!
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Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/20/2021 2:57:00 PM
Thank you for the comment. I write the best poems when it is basic rhyme. I love this website because it encourages me to try other forms of poetry. This one was basic rhyme and it was fun to write.
Date: 2/20/2021 1:06:00 PM
You never know what the day will bring and with hindsight should have stayed under the covers. Congrats on your win. Tom
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Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/20/2021 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Tom
Date: 2/20/2021 11:55:00 AM
Evelyn, congratulations on your podium placement with your creative and fun poem. I enjoyed it and loved the last line!
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Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/20/2021 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much.

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