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One moment she was there and the next she was gone like the wind when it blows through the eaves, one moment she was there and the next, she was not
The year was 1976 graduation day sweethearts her cheeks glowed softly, picking up the undertones of her second hand Fortrel peach dress she birthed magic in my soul as easily as a wizard holding and elder wand of great value Onwards to the year 2044, she flatlines in a cold room one January snowfall day like a silent befallen Angel, she succumbs to the light like a feather floating amongst the motes of a broken man's heart, a tiny feather floats down, it is all she leaves behind... Tuesday March 06 no birthday candles this year inside the old dusty attic sits an easel and a brush his trembling hands begin to paint a memory while the dawn softly skirts the reasserting sun, each new brushstroke brings her back to life One moment she isn't there and the next she is, just like the wind when it blows through the eaves.

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Date: 2/28/2024 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a lovely write/story with a great ending. I enjoyed reading it... Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 2/26/2024 12:20:00 PM
Great storytelling in your poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/26/2024 3:28:00 PM
I am truly honored S, thank you for my placement.
Date: 2/22/2024 1:56:00 AM
How quickly everything fades, reminds us to grasp onto the light we receive the little gifts of nature and beyond. I felt these lines the most and made me tear up as i read them “ Onwards to the year 2044, she flatlines in a cold room one January snowfall day like a silent befallen Angel, she succumbs to the light like a feather floating ” hits so strong while also your way of weaving words and your tone of expression is so delicate and soft! Pleasure reading you always dear sweet rose. Fav
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/26/2024 3:28:00 PM
Thank you dear Ink
Date: 2/21/2024 3:27:00 PM
Spectacular poem, Rose...a unique and beautifully creative take on the contest. Your poem was filled with sadness (his trembling hands begin to paint a memory) Just wow! best wishes with the contest, blessings, Sara
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/26/2024 3:28:00 PM
Thank you dear Sara

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