It Sits There - For Contest

It Sits There


It sits there,
like the old Chevy in the driveway,
empty, but for memories
of better days.

Days of running hot
on roads of steaming passion,
squealing tires speeding
the road to fulfillment,

time’s road markers
flashing past
in the dancing headlights
fading into lover’s dust.

It sits there,
just as big, as heavy,
as empty as the Chevy,
this worn out heart

seized by the decrepitude of age
drained of joy’s presence
mired in the melancholy
of the mind’s meanderings.

It sits there
blocking the driveway
of his life.



11/22/2015
submitted to Romantic Poem – poetry contest
sponsor SKAT A

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/21/2015 2:15:00 PM
wow, a very great analogy poem! I see it won PD's contest. Congrats to you.
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Date: 12/7/2015 4:08:00 PM
Great take on the theme, John, to remember those days of romance. I really enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2015 4:29:00 PM
AHHH,,,,,the days of lustful gazing and hand holding....thanks for stopping by Sandra.
Date: 12/6/2015 11:58:00 PM
What a romantic beauty John.. congrats on big win!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2015 4:28:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma, the metaphor of romance is often misconstrued...
Date: 12/6/2015 5:23:00 PM
John <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2015 4:27:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I try to peruse the poetic scroll that is PoetrySoup and touch a few with comments. T'ain't easy.
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