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It Sits There - For Contest

It Sits There It sits there, like the old Chevy in the driveway, empty, but for memories of better days. Days of running hot on roads of steaming passion, squealing tires speeding the road to fulfillment, time’s road markers flashing past in the dancing headlights fading into lover’s dust. It sits there, just as big, as heavy, as empty as the Chevy, this worn out heart seized by the decrepitude of age drained of joy’s presence mired in the melancholy of the mind’s meanderings. It sits there blocking the driveway of his life. 11/22/2015 submitted to Romantic Poem – poetry contest sponsor SKAT A

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Date: 12/21/2015 2:15:00 PM
wow, a very great analogy poem! I see it won PD's contest. Congrats to you.
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Date: 12/7/2015 4:08:00 PM
Great take on the theme, John, to remember those days of romance. I really enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2015 4:29:00 PM
AHHH,,,,,the days of lustful gazing and hand holding....thanks for stopping by Sandra.
Date: 12/6/2015 11:58:00 PM
What a romantic beauty John.. congrats on big win!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2015 4:28:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma, the metaphor of romance is often misconstrued...
Date: 12/6/2015 5:23:00 PM
John <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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John Lawless
Date: 12/7/2015 4:27:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I try to peruse the poetic scroll that is PoetrySoup and touch a few with comments. T'ain't easy.

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