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It Reads Like A Rap

Your rhyme reads like a rap they say, a rap I say, a rap they say, perhaps but rap is rhyme you see, it's rhyme really, it's rhyme you see, this poem is not lyrical, no not at all, not lyrical, 'cus songs use words repeatedly, repeat you see, repeatedly. We'll use that as the chorus, it's easy and thoughtless, lets build a rhyme fortress with verse summersaultus, not a word but I don't care, eating apples grapes and pears, seeking angles of praise from flair, story starts now take a chair. Out in public with clothes removed, I've had this dream but now it's true, a dude that's nude and on the move, without a pube all in plain view, swing it like a helicopter, round and round 'til someone stops ya, grab some weed and party poppers, run down streets to dart from coppers, drinking aftershock that shocks ya, always after the shot has docked ya, stick your head between some knockers, wake up thick lipped at the doctors. (Chorus) Write it like a conversation, it might give it a new dimension, in that last verse you forced the rhyme, of course that's fine in this rap rhyme, 'cus rap is rhyme it's rhyme they rap, that is a fact a fact is that, by it's nature rap is rhyme, if it reads like a rap then it reads like a rhyme, does that mean always rhyme is rap, of course it isn't it's less than that, now that sounds mean, what do you mean, rap rhymes are rhymes and rap, rhymes just rhyme they're not rap, well what's this verse then is it rap? No my friend this verse is crap, I hope they remember this is a conversation, they're not reading you lost their attention. (Chorus) A third verse now this is long winded, it's forced and pointless poets cringing, get back to the story, now you were knocked out, yes and I remember nowt, then what the hell's this rhyme about, it's like a selfie with lips that pout, no one cares except the poser, that means no one notes the nose hair, wrap this up it's going nowhere, rap it up like you're a rapper, this poem keeps on getting crapper, no one's read as far as here, in this worse rhyme you've wrote all year, at least it flows like hip hop songs, it flows with flow its flow is strong, to flow like this use words not long, here's the chorus lets sing along. (Chorus) it reads like a hip hop POTD 17/10/2018

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Date: 11/8/2018 2:38:00 PM
Hello Nick, Wow! This is a one of a kind poem like no other. I like what you have written. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/22/2018 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD my friend. I enjoyed seeing this immense creativity and clever writing . Such an enjoyable light-hearted poem to read. A fav..
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Date: 10/22/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Robert, very much appreciated (especially as you had to do it twice lol) thanks again :)
Date: 10/19/2018 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your Poem Of the Day Nick, with this creative write. Have a wonderful Friday.
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Date: 10/19/2018 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Vladislav :)
Date: 10/18/2018 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your cleverly written rhyme being honored with POTD Nick! : )
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Date: 10/19/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Connie :)
Date: 10/18/2018 1:12:00 PM
Belated congratulations Nick, love the selfie lol. Tom
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Date: 10/19/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Tom :)
Date: 10/17/2018 11:58:00 PM
Not half bad, this, I like what you've done here, very sharp-witted and imaginative, and POTD well earned. Nice write Nick.
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Date: 10/19/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Lawrence :)
Date: 10/17/2018 4:38:00 PM
WORST POEM OF THE DAY EVER lol
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Date: 10/17/2018 4:29:00 PM
Ha ha, made me laugh, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/17/2018 4:36:00 PM
thanks Tania :)
Date: 10/17/2018 12:13:00 PM
:) congratulation on POTD enjoyed reading
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Date: 10/17/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thanks Eve :)
Date: 10/17/2018 11:40:00 AM
:) If you were trying to bring a smile, then- it has worked. This made me giggle out loud. Gotta love humor in poetry when it is like a song. A Rap Song. Congratulations Nick, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/17/2018 4:38:00 PM
I'm glad to make you giggle aloud lol I set out to write a poem goes against what a good poem is lol I think I got away with it just about lol thanks Brandy :)
Date: 10/17/2018 9:40:00 AM
You 're flowing my friend...Congratulations...All the best
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Date: 10/17/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Arturo :)
Date: 10/17/2018 8:41:00 AM
Hysterically! Awesome!...Congrats!!! on your POTD! Nick...love & knockers!...^WW^
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Date: 10/17/2018 8:46:00 AM
thanks WW :)
Date: 10/17/2018 8:08:00 AM
Lol! This is totally hilarious, Nick. I loved the insane spirit of your poem and your rhymes, the forced rhymes especially.. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/17/2018 8:16:00 AM
lol thanks Susan, I thought this poem was so bad it might be good when I wrote it lol, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) it goes against everything a poem should do I feel ha ha :) thanks again
Date: 10/17/2018 8:01:00 AM
Brilliant poem, Nick. Congratulations on POTD. ~Warren
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Date: 10/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
thank you Warren :)
Date: 10/17/2018 7:25:00 AM
Awesome piece Nick! Congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Date: 10/17/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thank You Maureen :)
Date: 10/17/2018 7:12:00 AM
... :))) ... very good, Nick ! - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2018 7:15:00 AM
thanks Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/17/2018 6:22:00 AM
I did read as far as there, and later it still went no where.... still enjoyed it Nick, congratulations
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Date: 10/17/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, I admit it's not the best poem lol
Date: 10/15/2018 10:52:00 PM
I'm very proud of the fact I set out to write a bad poem with good rhymes even if I do look like I've lost my mind lol
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