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It rained throughout the trip

Lousy cruise is finally over.
We didn't visit a single freakin' island.
Should have gone Peak Season.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

POTD November 19, 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Murray Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 2:32 AM
My first laugh of the day. Forgive me Line and well deserved win.
Gauthier Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 7:51 AM
The funniest thing is that it seems several people didn't look at the image and assumed I was complaining about a disappointing cruise I'd been on ~ lol
George Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:38 PM
A cruise becomes enjoyable only if the weather is good. Sad you couldn't enjoy. Congratulations on your POTD
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:42 PM
Thanks, Valsa ~
Bayles Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 2:48 PM
Line, congratulations on POTD.
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:41 PM
Thanks, Mike ~
Wolf Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Missed this one. Glad I caught it for POTD, Line. ~ Pea King Sasson
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:41 PM
Thanks, Gershon ~ much appreciated
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Hello Line, congratulations on POTD! Best wishes in next cruise/s. Have a nice day ~ AA
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:41 PM
Thanks, Abdullah ~
Rodgers Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Hello, Line. I am so sorry the cruise was a bust. (LOL) No matter, you got POTD! Congratulations! Autumn Blessings, Line, Daniel
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:40 PM
Thanks Daniel ~
Bartley Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations on your Bitesize POTD. Thanks for sharing!
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:40 PM
lol ~ thanks, Benjamin
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 8:38 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "It rained throughout the trip" write. Sorry you did not enjoy your cruise. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:40 PM
Truth be told, Noah's Ark was a bit before my time ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 4:33 AM
appreciate the brevity and simplicity in your poetic style. congrats on your POTD designation. Applause.
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:38 PM
Thanks, Sara ~
Alex Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 4:04 AM
Simplistically sincere work. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:38 PM
Thanks for the read and comment ~
Jones Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:29 AM
Aw sorry it rained. Congratulations on potd!
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:37 PM
lol ~ thanks Karen
Kitchin Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Line, congratulations on POTD.
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:37 PM
Thanks, Tania ~
Seeker Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 1:11 AM
Too bad but then it may be taken as a cosmic joke! Congratulations on POTD, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Thank you very much ~ have a lovely day
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Really great! Fave!
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 1:46 PM
lol ~ thanks Kim
Rose  Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 4:35 AM
lol I love the witty write and the beautiful photo too dear Lin, have a fantastic day, love
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Thanks, Rose ~ have an awesome day !
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