It Rained That Day - 20 Titles

IT RAINED THAT DAY — Twenty Titles


Many, many long years ago ~
   In moon glow, a tall ship.
      Marianne in shades of blue.

An infamous legend, her Captain’s call.
   She was caught, trapped.

Immensely vast — the open sea.
   There is so much heartbreak to see.

An infinite ocean, black powder.
   His captive sighs, “What must I do…”

Dancing with the devil
   by the shifting candlelight.

The shadow on the wall.
   The warm downward spiral.
       Drowning in his lust...

...it rained that day

7/20/2019

Her Captain’s Call Gregory R Barden 
In Moon Glow Andrea Dietrich 
Marianne Victor Buhagiar 
An Infinite Ocean Demetrios Trifiatis 
Caught, Trapped Gershon Wolf 

Shades of Blue Sandra Adams 
A Tall Ship Line Gauthier 
Drowning In His Lust Dear Heart
Black Powder Maureen McGreavy 
An Infamous Legend Jennifer Proxenos 

The Warm Downward Spiral Lady Labyrinth 
Many, many long years ago Tom Cunningham 
Immensely Vast Chris Green 
The Open Sea Ilene Bauer 
There Is Such Heartbreak To See Timothy McGuire 

Dancing with the Devil Silent One 
By The Shifting Candlelight Gary Smith 
What Must I Do Alexis Y 
The Shadow on the Wall Darlene De Beaulieu 
It Rained That Day Freddie Robinson Jr.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/3/2019 9:03:00 AM
I’m glad you enjoyed it Kim. Blessings Richard.
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Date: 8/2/2019 9:05:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest, much appreciated. ;0)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thank you too! It was a joy to piece titles together! ...Kim
Date: 8/2/2019 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on your placement..Kim, love the poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/2/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thank you, Harry! :)
Date: 8/1/2019 7:23:00 PM
Very nice and well done Kim. Congrats on your placement...hugs Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Charles! Hugs...Kim
Date: 8/1/2019 4:03:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Kim. Congrats and thanks for using one of my poem titles.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 5:14:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs
Date: 8/1/2019 12:46:00 PM
- A lovey poem, so well put together, Kim - Congratulations on your 4th place on the winner list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs
Date: 8/1/2019 10:45:00 AM
Nice to see this on the winning list Kim. Congratulations. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 7/21/2019 9:47:00 PM
I am honored to be a part of this terrific write. Who knows in this contest, as it is packed with amazing poems already, but here's to a win for you. Best wishes, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2019 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 7/21/2019 11:26:00 AM
Wow! Kim, You did an amazing job chosing the titles to make a new poem. I am honored that you chose one of my titles. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2019 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 7/21/2019 8:10:00 AM
Wow, well done Kim! Great use of finding titles to tell your own story. Top of the list I am sure!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2019 11:20:00 AM
We will see...thank you, Jeanne!
Date: 7/21/2019 6:57:00 AM
Kim, this was so well done I had no idea you created this from other poet's titles. Wow! Wonderfully constructed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2019 7:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Caren!
Date: 7/21/2019 2:31:00 AM
Wow, can't believe this is only from titles, you've done a fantastic job. Wish you luck Kim. Tom. Honoured you used one of mine.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2019 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 7/21/2019 1:32:00 AM
Wonderfully displayed. DMB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2019 5:39:00 AM
Thank you, DM!
Date: 7/20/2019 11:31:00 PM
Excellent piece - you brilliantly incorporated 20 relevant titles bringing a flawless cohesiveness to this poem! Bravo, Kim! Hugs. Pandita
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2019 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Pandita!
Date: 7/20/2019 8:22:00 PM
brilliantly done with such succinctness, and thanks for using one of my titles!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thank you! It’s an honor to use one of your titles!
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