It Never Goes Well When the Hen Crows

("I know full well, if I can tolerate her spirit, I can with ease attach myself to every human being else," so said Socrates! The title is inspired by a proverb)



He married to the fairest of fair shepherdess The shepherd was much older than the dame But the fairest of dames was not headless one. Was given the charge of the house with little money. Folks knew well she was not quarrelsome wife But the husband ignored his duties day by day Wasted time, roaming in the country with sheep a few Wandering with friends, wondering at God’s creations. But that didn’t fetch the livelihood of the family He was in heaven as his wife never scolded him Silence was her fair jewel, which she always wore But she kept her sharp tongue intact, never to rut. A day came, she bemused her silence, mused tongue Obviously he has to face a wife much younger than him With rutted tongue, tolerated her tantrums and tongue. So that with ease he can enjoy his daily lazy routine.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date 12-16-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Second place win Form: Free Verse Contest: Relate your poem to one of the quotes by Giorgio Veneto Chosen quote: 1) "By all means, marry. If you get a good wife, you’ll become happy; if you get a bad one, you’ll become a philosopher." - Socrates

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Date: 3/20/2014 10:04:00 PM
Dr. Ram A creative and interesting write. Very intriguing and captivating. Thanks for the great comment on my Single Mom poem.
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Date: 1/16/2014 5:49:00 PM
Wonderful poem Dr. Ram Mehta, very true for marriages, you show great insight, I like the title.
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Date: 12/21/2013 8:06:00 PM
A very interesting story that you told here in this poem. It goes very well with the quote you chose. Very good work, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/20/2013 7:46:00 AM
Dr.Mehta, it seems i will become a philosopher. Pray GOD I live happy. great poem.Congrats on your win.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/19/2013 7:05:00 PM
Nice use of the quote Dr Ram..really enjoyed your poem...congratulations
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Date: 12/19/2013 4:49:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win Dr. Ram :D hug, Yanny
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Date: 12/19/2013 12:08:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Dr. Ram in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/19/2013 11:23:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Dr Ram
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:00:00 AM
Amazing verse! Congrats on your placement : ) Always, Laura
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Date: 12/17/2013 9:45:00 AM
This poem transmits great messages.An excellent tale I much enjoyed.
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Date: 12/17/2013 9:18:00 AM
Hah Doc its as if u were relating my life somehow. Dis was wel humord n entertaining. Wow to dis fun domestic poem.
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Date: 12/18/2013 4:28:00 AM
Thanks for your hilarious comments, Zaynub
Date: 12/16/2013 8:24:00 AM
deep one Ram enjoyed it gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
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