It Never Goes Well When the Hen Crows

("I know full well, if I can tolerate her spirit, I can with ease attach myself to every human being else," so said Socrates! The title is inspired by a proverb)



He married to the fairest of fair shepherdess The shepherd was much older than the dame But the fairest of dames was not headless one. Was given the charge of the house with little money. Folks knew well she was not quarrelsome wife But the husband ignored his duties day by day Wasted time, roaming in the country with sheep a few Wandering with friends, wondering at God’s creations. But that didn’t fetch the livelihood of the family He was in heaven as his wife never scolded him Silence was her fair jewel, which she always wore But she kept her sharp tongue intact, never to rut. A day came, she bemused her silence, mused tongue Obviously he has to face a wife much younger than him With rutted tongue, tolerated her tantrums and tongue. So that with ease he can enjoy his daily lazy routine.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date 12-16-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Second place win Form: Free Verse Contest: Relate your poem to one of the quotes by Giorgio Veneto Chosen quote: 1) "By all means, marry. If you get a good wife, you’ll become happy; if you get a bad one, you’ll become a philosopher." - Socrates
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Davis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 10:04 PM
Dr. Ram A creative and interesting write. Very intriguing and captivating. Thanks for the great comment on my Single Mom poem.
Harper Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Wonderful poem Dr. Ram Mehta, very true for marriages, you show great insight, I like the title.
Deschler Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 8:06 PM
A very interesting story that you told here in this poem. It goes very well with the quote you chose. Very good work, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win!
Undertaker Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Dr.Mehta, it seems i will become a philosopher. Pray GOD I live happy. great poem.Congrats on your win.(: ) Jenish.
Jones Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Nice use of the quote Dr Ram..really enjoyed your poem...congratulations
Widjanarko Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win Dr. Ram :D hug, Yanny
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December 19, 2013 at 12:08 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Dr. Ram in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 11:23 AM
congrats on a fine win Dr Ram
Breidenthal Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Amazing verse! Congrats on your placement : ) Always, Laura
Chircop Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 9:45 AM
This poem transmits great messages.An excellent tale I much enjoyed.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Hah Doc its as if u were relating my life somehow. Dis was wel humord n entertaining. Wow to dis fun domestic poem.
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 4:28 AM
Thanks for your hilarious comments, Zaynub
Hamilton Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 8:24 AM
deep one Ram enjoyed it gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
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