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It Isn'T In the Time

it isn't in the time, neither in the dream nor in the feeling's vagueness but it is to what uncertainty as well the ungovernable hopelessness - which here outline the notes of a forgetful page, like a mark will be going to melt away in the snow - nearlier fix themselves onto, it is to that you hand over, what of yourself the memories leave behind and what never admired you won't be able to gaze at anymore... but it's the instant it is the instant which snows of memories ancient and lost, ravagely fascinating memories, unforgettable emotions which bloodily plunge their cutting sword into your soul, and you, you aren't able to bear your bundle of rags and doubtful intents further on anymore, as under the dismayed light of the misted illuminance life vanishes

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Date: 5/28/2014 5:25:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:10:00 AM
URBANO, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/16/2014 12:41:00 AM
I felt very touched and realy happy to read your kind and lovable comment and welcome. thank you very much and best wishes to you
Date: 5/12/2014 11:48:00 AM
Urbano, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/11/2014 4:08:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have found this to be a friendly community of poetry lovers; I hope that will be your experience as well. Jump in, write and enjoy!
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Date: 5/11/2014 8:37:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Urbano :) - I choose your first well written poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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