It is You



Swallowed in  the deepest recesses of the night
enveloping me in satin folds, so dark, so lonely.
The emptiness I see emanates from within me.
Like moonless nights that swallow the sun in ebon darkness,
it seeps from my pores blinding me
the loneliness ever reaching for me.  
Then like the colors of a brilliance cut diamond
the darkness breaks and morning splendor appears.

It is you who banishes the clouds.
It is you who's radiance illuminates my soul.
It is you who warms me with your beautiful light.
It is you who whispers gentle secrets into my ear.
It is you who makes me smile.
It is you who gives me hope.
It is you who helps me live again.
It is you.
It is you;
until, you are no more.

Without explanation, without reason, without comment
you have cast me back into the darkness, into the loneliness
into the pain of never ending night;
Now, but, to await the ending of time in its final mercy.
Never more to again know such emptiness and boundless sorrow.
Finally to realize the comfort of ever lasting sleep,
never to dream again, never to feel the agony,
as my soul writhes and withers in my grave.



11/21/2024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 8/2/2025 7:06:00 PM
James such a heartfelt piece my friend, I can really relate and at one time was in a dark place like this. It really hit home with me. How great are your lyrics my friend they really captures grief and despair a favorite my friend. Keep writing James we miss you...
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Date: 5/25/2025 9:17:00 PM
I can feel the loneliness, the hope in this James. You’re an incredible writer! I love the contrast of the darkness and the light—both are powerful in this piece. Hope things will look up on your end—you deserve to wake up to the light, not the darkness! Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 5/26/2025 6:17:00 AM
An especially long day, Laura. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 2/28/2025 1:14:00 PM
It is a pain that makes one wish for death... I'm sorry to read life has been abusing you as well. But I wish so much the best for you James. Take care please
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FJ Thomas
Date: 3/2/2025 11:10:00 AM
I wish I could say I didn't understand, but I understand ...far too well. May you find peace James, one that cannot be taken from you.
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James Inman
Date: 3/2/2025 4:51:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. It is the difficulty of knowing that deep inside of me I could pick myself up and move on with life and never look back, but not wanting to that hurts. I don't want the change that has come. I just want my life back.
Date: 2/7/2025 8:44:00 PM
Oh, how beautifully you expressed the depth of depression from pain love-lost can cost. I felt the desperation of pain in your emotive lines. Your write delivers. Where are you? I was gone about 3 years, until this month, and came to check on you. Hello? CayCay
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James Inman
Date: 2/8/2025 10:20:00 AM
Hi CayCay, its nice to hear from you. i'm afraid my life has taken some very unpleasant turns in the last couple of years and I have had little incentive to write. I visit the soup only occasionally now. Talking about me, where did you go?
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