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It is time

It's time to check your timing, It's now or never, If you want your star to be shining. Now is not the time to be hiding, While your timing is out, And your luck is not in. It's time to take notice, Why others are getting all the focus. It's time to get into line while you still have time. The line between failure and success, Is no mere guess, It's timing, timing, timing.

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Date: 3/21/2017 8:49:00 PM
Hi David, just shared your poem with a group of 14 year olds, they say "it was meaningful", "it is inspiring" thanks for your share. :)
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David Smith
Date: 3/22/2017 12:06:00 AM
Good to know Lewis. Using poetry to reach out to the young and get them them thinking and questioning is an excellentway of doing things. Best regards David in NZ
Date: 3/21/2017 5:34:00 PM
Hello David, I like this poem. It is full of advice. I will make it my favourite. A 7 for your poem.
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Date: 3/21/2017 11:55:00 PM
Glad you like it. One of my daughters is a walking example of getting your timing right. Only 23 and Roading engineer for Wellington city Council. Did her diploma at right time. Best regards Davids in NZ