James Peranteau Poet Free verse

It Is Pronounced, Kiss

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       It is pronounced
              kisss

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       our lips locked
        and our pant
               hot

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           I behind
       and her pillow
         in rigid grip

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Elizabeth Wesley June 5, 2012 at 3:03 PM Strange things happen in that second verse and I see that Daver feels the damage as well as I. Love, Lizzie

Daver Austin October 30, 2010 at 7:26 AM I fight to conjure up a lovely, innocent scene, but cannot. I am a churl and a varlet and a dirty old man. Now? I know my friend, Sir James, wouldn't purposely cause heart failure in one so old as myself. Hardy Harr. Love, Dave

Sharon Ruebel October 27, 2010 at 11:34 AM James, WOW! I felt this one in all its passion. What a great write. As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 19, 2010 at 1:36 PM Kiss is always a positive ... good one James as I commented below..luv..

Constance La France October 19, 2010 at 6:48 AM If this is considered porn, then we have loads of them on this site, I think it is passionate and visual, and a very lovely visual it is, just ignore anyone who calls it porn, they are not in touch with reality~~

John Loving Iii October 18, 2010 at 4:32 PM not in the mood.jhl

C.C Bloomsfield October 17, 2010 at 9:16 AM Very romantic James!Celene!

Sara Kendrick October 15, 2010 at 5:11 PM Interesting write..Very hot steamy passionate work..Thanks for stopping by my blog and the encouraging words..Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2010 at 4:50 PM My goodness, very sexy one here!! I liked Linda's comment below. OH, and yeah, that's why it 's too bad I don't like pickles. All the stuff to make ya lose weight, I usually don't like it!! Dang.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 15, 2010 at 2:53 PM Very passionate and sensuous write, James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 15, 2010 at 12:05 PM OK this is too cool James and too hot too.. luv it my friend.. the tree stump is out back next to my driveway so come help yourself to a rub luv..haha and happy weekend too..

Nette Onclaud October 15, 2010 at 11:09 AM passion brews! well-penned, james! nette

Nate D. October 15, 2010 at 11:08 AM lovely and romantic, my friend'

Carolyn Devonshire October 15, 2010 at 9:50 AM Very romantic, James! I know you don't do contests, but this would make a great entry for the "Yay for K" contest! Now that I'm in Jersey, we should make a point of meeting. I'd like to see Noah, too! Love, Carolyn