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It Is Over,Or Is It

The glint in your eyes is gone. Your kisses, less tender. What happened? Those warm Spring days..you and I beneath a red umbrella, huddled in the rain. Sweet memories. It leaves its rose-bud tracks! I can still smell your aftershave lotion. Ah, but love in it’s forever, foot-stepped gifted motions. I experience you, whenever I choose to. ………In sultry, memory explosions!……… 10/27/2021

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Date: 10/28/2021 7:53:00 PM
You had me dejected there for a minute -- until your love exploded from your pen. Skillful penning, my friend.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/28/2021 8:11:00 PM
Awww....glad I did not dissapoint you Panagiota
Date: 10/28/2021 3:11:00 AM
This piece was so full of melody like a song. I really enjoyed it.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/28/2021 4:56:00 AM
Elena, good morning,,,I do think in lyrics. Pangie
Date: 10/27/2021 2:06:00 PM
"The glint in your eyes is gone. Your kisses, less tender. What happened?" For sure, cherish the good memories.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/27/2021 3:25:00 PM
PRINCE DE MINO. THOSE good memories! Ah...like melted chocolate.. I never forgot, Pangie
Date: 10/27/2021 1:48:00 PM
Pangie I have a T-shirt the reads "I WAS MUGGED ON MEMORY LANE".....
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/27/2021 3:22:00 PM
John, you are so bad! LOL, what a T shirt. Sheesh! Memory Lane is safe so far. I will carry a night stick and whistle and say..JoHn Law...if anyone mugs me, Roflmao....Pangie with a large baseball bat. Merci
Date: 10/27/2021 10:52:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I read it as his kisses less passionate. The other person has the memory as to the way it was. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/27/2021 3:30:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, oh she will find this hard to deal with. She still cares for him. A one sided love. Thais not good. Hugs.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/27/2021 3:18:00 PM
Hi DARLENE! Yes, she felt he was not all there as he once was! And she missed how they once were. Merci, Pangie
Date: 10/27/2021 10:22:00 AM
Beautiful Pangie!…… Love is never truly over, it’s there safe in your heart to stay - It may not be in your vision, yet is only a heartbeat away - Love remains in one’s memory, a movie of precious times - Whenever you feel sad or lonely, go back and click on rewind…… Belle
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