It Is Over,Or Is It





The glint in your eyes is gone.
Your kisses, less tender.
What happened?

Those warm Spring days..you
and I beneath a red umbrella,
huddled in the rain.

Sweet memories.
It leaves its rose-bud tracks!
I can still smell your aftershave lotion.

Ah, but love in it’s forever, foot-stepped
gifted motions.
I experience you, whenever I choose to.

………In sultry, memory explosions!………


                 10/27/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 7:53 PM
You had me dejected there for a minute -- until your love exploded from your pen. Skillful penning, my friend.
Romios Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 8:11 PM
Awww....glad I did not dissapoint you Panagiota
Eagle Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 3:11 AM
This piece was so full of melody like a song. I really enjoyed it.
Romios Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 4:56 AM
Elena, good morning,,,I do think in lyrics. Pangie
DiMino Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 2:06 PM
"The glint in your eyes is gone. Your kisses, less tender. What happened?" For sure, cherish the good memories.
Romios Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 3:25 PM
PRINCE DE MINO. THOSE good memories! Ah...like melted chocolate.. I never forgot, Pangie
Lawless Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Pangie I have a T-shirt the reads "I WAS MUGGED ON MEMORY LANE".....
Romios Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 3:22 PM
John, you are so bad! LOL, what a T shirt. Sheesh! Memory Lane is safe so far. I will carry a night stick and whistle and say..JoHn Law...if anyone mugs me, Roflmao....Pangie with a large baseball bat. Merci
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Hello Panagiota, I read it as his kisses less passionate. The other person has the memory as to the way it was. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Hello Panagiota, oh she will find this hard to deal with. She still cares for him. A one sided love. Thais not good. Hugs.
Romios Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 3:18 PM
Hi DARLENE! Yes, she felt he was not all there as he once was! And she missed how they once were. Merci, Pangie
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October 27, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Beautiful Pangie!…… Love is never truly over, it’s there safe in your heart to stay - It may not be in your vision, yet is only a heartbeat away - Love remains in one’s memory, a movie of precious times - Whenever you feel sad or lonely, go back and click on rewind…… Belle
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