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It Is Not That Trite

Sand gets grayer, melting sun Merges into setting phase Waves slow down their run To the quieter pace Gentler blows the ocean breeze Cirrus clouds decay Shines a metaphor of peace In the air today Looks like postcard type of view But it’s not that trite On the premise of the few Who can breathe the light.

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