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The highlight of the Jersey shore at Seaside Heights, it is no more; the famous park's old Ferris wheel that kids looked forward to with zeal. The sounds of music, loud and clear along the boardwalk, all would hear, and to the wheel the kids would run; for generations, had such fun. Most children, grandkids knew the thrill; the wheel spun 'round, was never still. Until one day, two-thousand-twelve, this old-time joy would then be shelved. When 'Sandy Superstorm' arrived not much within the park survived. The sound of children, music, stopped; with roars of wind and sea were swapped The howls of wind did make their rounds, replaced kid's laughter, happy sounds. Collapsed and twisted storm debris would squeal and screech coldheartedly. Amusement park's old Ferris wheel that kids looked forward to with zeal; the highlight of the Jersey shore, at Seaside Heights...it is no more. October 20, 2017 Contest: The Sounds of the Past Sponsor: Eve Roper Theme: Ferris Wheel 1st Place The new Ferris Wheel finally opened this summer, 2017...it took five years to rebuild. However, the vintage, old-time flavor is gone with the Ferris wheel and boardwalk

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Date: 11/5/2017 9:54:00 AM
Wonderfully written, charming. Congrats on your well deserved win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2017 3:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line, for your very supportive comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 11/4/2017 4:15:00 PM
Much enjoyed Sandra, congrats :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gary, for reading my poem and your nice comment and grats. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 11/4/2017 12:43:00 PM
Sandra, I enjoyed reading your poem, congrats on your win. Well done. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 11/4/2017 11:55:00 AM
Sandra, your written poem made me feel its presence all around me. Wonderful write, Arthur was write the flow is wonderful. Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2017 3:31:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, for another inspiring contest that I enjoyed writing for. I appreciate my nice placement, your congrats, and nice comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/20/2017 2:21:00 PM
Ah you have told the story so well, I loved how this poem flows from one line to the next!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2017 3:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Arthur. Sandra

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