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It Happened On a Rainy Night - Collaboration

Foggy mists engulfed the bright
When raindrops fell throughout the night
The lamppost glowed at midnights dark
When sweethearts kissed at Lover’s Park

Soft oily rainbows slowly flowed
Beneath our feet as movement slowed
For naught but nature could intrude
Into this lover’s interlude

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Date: 9/6/2023 9:12:00 AM
Your words conjure up such fantastic images. So powerful from start to finish.
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Date: 9/3/2023 5:48:00 AM
John, I love the images conjured by your romantic collar! Beautiful !!! Happy Sunday!
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Date: 9/3/2023 1:26:00 AM
I love the imagery here, seamless flow and so stunning. And those rhymes are truly captivating and so unique. Lovers interlude so eloquently captured
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