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Written: September 17, 2023 It Happened On A Misty Morning Sponsored by: Charles Messina _______________________________________________________________ Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone A garden bloomed in vibrant hues In their fragrant splendor, love imbued Each petal held a whispered word Of promises made and love assured

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Date: 9/21/2023 6:24:00 PM
wow it flows in perfectly, I'm sure he will love this gl in the contest
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Date: 9/19/2023 4:55:00 PM
A FAV for my list my dear friend. An excellent entry for the contest. the imagery was lovely, and you told a touching love story in a short and concise way. Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:24:00 AM
This is definitely a top winning write! How beautiful is this! I love how you’ve written “ in their fragrant splendor love imbued” so good! Your way of phrasing things is so poetic as if poetry runs through your veins, “ each petal held a whispered word” wow thats gorgeous! “ this is truly soul warming and very well articulated with sublime rhymes that would leave any reader in awe! I always enjoy reading your poems. Wishing you all the best in the contest.
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Date: 9/18/2023 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful addendum to the prior stanza.
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Date: 9/18/2023 5:46:00 AM
- Love comes in many different packages... a lovely poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a great week :) - hugs
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Date: 9/18/2023 4:44:00 AM
Awesome write my friend. A superb complement to the given stanza. Succinct and well done!
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Date: 9/18/2023 1:22:00 AM
Lovely Sotto, your verse compliments the one above perfectly, a fabulous collaboration… Belle
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Date: 9/17/2023 8:19:00 PM
Awwn, this is such a lovely poem hued with beautiful nostalgia of love and eloquently described with its beautiful essence.. Reading this poem felt like strolling in a paradise or in an orchard scented with fragrances of faith and hope. "each petal held a whispered word" ,"each promise made and love assured" Wow, an elegant take for the contest, best of luck :)
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Date: 9/17/2023 7:33:00 PM
I enjoyed the imagery, nice :-) -AG
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Date: 9/17/2023 4:55:00 PM
Lasaad, your lines are wonderfully suitable for the given verse.
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Date: 9/17/2023 4:44:00 PM
Very lovely, Sotto. And thanks for my recent poetry win
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