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It Happened All of a Sudden

It happened all of a sudden My own village outgrowing its own space With its sun bathing golden paddy spikes gone for good Usurped as they are by the murky canopies of rubber trees A second hand substitute with a sky high profit line Through which a speckled sun peeps down On fields which were once free of fleas and ticks Whose air grew a thousand butterfly fingers To caress you to a new life And which is now home for midges and mosquitoes Sinking fast hostile barbs into your same-same flesh That but flinches though immune to pin pricks Uncured as they are of avarice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/31/2014 1:12:00 AM
Wow, so true I have seen the vanishing paddy fields too and often wondered if the so called development is really needed. Congratulations on the win
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Date: 1/28/2014 8:28:00 PM
Enjoyed your first write and congrats on the win, S.nair
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:24:00 PM
- Nice to read your first poem,Jag - Also enjoyable that you got it in 3rd place in the contest - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2014 5:21:00 PM
how nice to find this superb poem is yours, jaggy, beautiful descriptions; I've never been to india but you painted a vivid picture for me here, I particularly liked the 'butterfly fingers' line - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 12/16/2012 8:40:00 AM
Hi Jag, just visiting your first post on soup, wow awesome poem, glad i came here...
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Date: 7/7/2012 9:24:00 PM
Trying to reread some of these that I liked so much...
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Date: 6/1/2012 3:16:00 AM
We call that urban sprawl and it sure does happen fast! What a change in your ecosystem too....powerful contrasting in your free verse...wonderful words describing your village's metamorphosis! I see Brian also liked this one and it won in his contest! Great job, Jag! G.
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Date: 2/14/2012 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Fifteen" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2012 8:55:00 AM
Very nice write. Congratulations on your HM win in Brian's contest................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:25:00 AM
JAG,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:43:00 PM
wow, this is a fantastic poem, Jag. Congrats on the HM. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/11/2012 5:46:00 PM
congrats Jag on a great HM for this excellent writre anfd entry luv.. hope all is going great for u ...
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Date: 2/11/2012 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You are describing a place where I would not want to live.
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Date: 2/10/2012 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 9/21/2011 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:06:00 PM
CONGRATS JAG ON A SUPER SIXTH PLACE WIN WITH THIS FEATURED POETRY LUV..
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:37:00 PM
Well written. Congrats on your win. Kim
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Date: 9/17/2011 11:24:00 AM
Congrats S.J.onyour win in PD's contest.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. S.Nair
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:48:00 AM
A winning congratulations! CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:12:00 AM
S.J.,Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:41:00 PM
Congrats Jag on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful to share luv..
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Date: 7/9/2011 6:48:00 PM
Your verse brings me to a foriegn land at once both beautiful and dangerous...thanks you! [YOU are so KIND! Thanks so much for your comment the verse Dancing in the Dark is a bit steamy for the site so I really appreciate it ;)} Light & Love
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Date: 6/8/2011 12:31:00 PM
I enjoyed reading each of the four poems you have posted thus far. You have a captivating style - rich visual imagery and profound emotional connection. I will keep an eye out for more of your work. Cheers, ~Soulfire~
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