It Happened All of a Sudden

It happened  all of a sudden 
My own village outgrowing its own space
With its sun bathing golden paddy spikes gone for good 
Usurped as they are by the murky canopies of rubber trees 
A second hand substitute with a sky high profit line
Through which a speckled sun peeps down
On fields which were once free of fleas and ticks
Whose air grew a thousand butterfly fingers
To caress you to a new life
And which is now home for midges and mosquitoes
Sinking fast hostile barbs into your same-same flesh
That but flinches though immune to pin pricks
Uncured as they are of avarice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ali Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 1:12 AM
Wow, so true I have seen the vanishing paddy fields too and often wondered if the so called development is really needed. Congratulations on the win
Mehta Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Enjoyed your first write and congrats on the win, S.nair
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January 28, 2014 at 6:24 PM
- Nice to read your first poem,Jag - Also enjoyable that you got it in 3rd place in the contest - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 28, 2014 at 5:21 PM
how nice to find this superb poem is yours, jaggy, beautiful descriptions; I've never been to india but you painted a vivid picture for me here, I particularly liked the 'butterfly fingers' line - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Horsman Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Hi Jag, just visiting your first post on soup, wow awesome poem, glad i came here...
Song Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Trying to reread some of these that I liked so much...
Song Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 3:16 AM
We call that urban sprawl and it sure does happen fast! What a change in your ecosystem too....powerful contrasting in your free verse...wonderful words describing your village's metamorphosis! I see Brian also liked this one and it won in his contest! Great job, Jag! G.
Brown Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Fifteen" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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February 13, 2012 at 8:55 AM
Very nice write. Congratulations on your HM win in Brian's contest................S.Ronthorpe
A   Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 2:25 AM
JAG,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 8:43 PM
wow, this is a fantastic poem, Jag. Congrats on the HM. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 5:46 PM
congrats Jag on a great HM for this excellent writre anfd entry luv.. hope all is going great for u ...
Pettit Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on your win. You are describing a place where I would not want to live.
Bunton Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations!
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Jag. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 5:06 PM
CONGRATS JAG ON A SUPER SIXTH PLACE WIN WITH THIS FEATURED POETRY LUV..
Merryman Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Well written. Congrats on your win. Kim
Poet Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 11:24 AM
Congrats S.J.onyour win in PD's contest.Enjoyed your poem.
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. S.Nair
Ramsdale Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 3:48 AM
A winning congratulations! CR
A   Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 2:12 AM
S.J.,Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jag. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 11:41 PM
Congrats Jag on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful to share luv..
Guzzi Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Your verse brings me to a foriegn land at once both beautiful and dangerous...thanks you! [YOU are so KIND! Thanks so much for your comment the verse Dancing in the Dark is a bit steamy for the site so I really appreciate it ;)} Light & Love
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June 8, 2011 at 12:31 PM
I enjoyed reading each of the four poems you have posted thus far. You have a captivating style - rich visual imagery and profound emotional connection. I will keep an eye out for more of your work. Cheers, ~Soulfire~
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