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Written on February 19, 2024

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at the edge of my heart, frayed lines linger, reflecting all the memories that hold two lives together ~ by poet It might not mean that you have gone, But when I feel my heart’s light grow dim And the strangeness of yesterday’s dawn, Reminds me of that old, old hymn… It might not mean the silence has come, To the heart who feels so dark and alone, Though my thoughts often will succumb, Beneath the hesitation of a shadow’s groan… It might not mean your love is wrong, But everywhere, there are hues of fear, Pressuring me to listen to the words of the song, Collecting them all – every single tear… It might not mean each breath is a prayer, To feel your love, I’d quiet my obsession’s grasp, Knowing that you’ve caused me to beware, Quivering smiles, pleasures who tend to gasp… It might not mean that I’ve given up on you, But sometimes it seems that is all I can do, Though our love is no longer brand-new, Something inside me will ever pursue… It might not mean that our hearts are through, To me, you’re not a saint, but you’re so good – When I feel least sure, you bring sweet déjà vu, Though it’s not perfect, it feels just like it should. It might not mean that we will always hold on, But there isn’t a doubt that we’ve shared the best, Moments in our past, I’d build a life upon – We can be certain we’ve been blessed!

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Date: 2/23/2024 6:50:00 AM
Romantic and sweet Gina. An "old" love that's survived the years and trials in a relationship. hugs! :)
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Date: 2/20/2024 8:14:00 AM
The various thoughts and feelings you mention describe the complex nature of relationships. It's not a simple condition of on or off. This is actually very instructive for all of us who struggle to "wrap up" any old relationship if that is even possible.
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Date: 2/19/2024 8:59:00 PM
The picture you chose and the personal quote, were outstanding. A love poem, that approaches life and relationships with open eyes, open hearts, and focuses on the positives as memories. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, Gina. Thanks for sharing from your heart, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/19/2024 3:51:00 PM
Regina, a poem that is truly unique. Because for me, it vacillates between uncertaity and certainty, And either way…that last libe says it al ~ We can be certain, we’ve been blessedl” Not everyone has this unique beluef, Regina, i say, you are blessed!Awesome. Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/19/2024 3:24:00 PM
what a light and delightful poem that addresses the uncertainties that come with relationships. I love the upbeat ending that focuses on the positives and the blessings. Well done, Gina. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/19/2024 12:21:00 PM
Hey Gina, I love your opening quote... Your poem beautifully captures the complexities of love, longing, and the uncertainties that often accompany relationships. Through its lyrical language and introspective tone, the speaker navigates the intricate emotions that arise when faced with the challenges and joys of love.
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