It Feels Like Love

Where do i begin?
where do i begin to explain
the way i am feeling inside
where do i begin to explain
the way he makes me feel.
I've tried pulling away,running away,
ignoring this feeling that i feel.
  but my body is saying no
  my body is crying for him,yearning for him,
  longing for him so much that it feels as if
      rim losing myself
losing myself in this crazy,wicked feeling
 that is taking over me
          does he know?
i do not know
 but this feeling is growing stronger each time i hear his 
   charming,deep but gentle voice
that make me want to lose control
this feeling grows stronger every time i see his face,
his presence just melts my heart,
his presence that makes me want to run....and smash into him
oh god,what am i feeling
how do i begin to tell this feeling.......this creature.....
this desire.......this longing that i feel inside
his touch,when he touches me i lose control
i feel that i am in another world,
filled with tender love and care
the touch that is so gentle,
the touch that breaks all my defenses,
that makes everything seem alright,
that washes away all my troubles 
   what will i be without him?
where will i be without him?
this feeling that he has created in my heart
        i cannot escape
        i cannot avoid
        i cannot ignore
but what do i call it
        is it care?
        is it a want?
        is it a need?
i do not know,but this feeling.........oh this feeling
sure does feel like love
but how do i explain this feeling
  i hope he can see the feeling i can't explain 
it sure feels like love
it feels like love!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/9/2025 6:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/19/2016 7:43:00 PM
HILENGIWE, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 10/22/2012 12:32:00 PM
come back
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Date: 7/24/2011 12:15:00 AM
Give in and let it comsume you :-). Hlengiwe three amazing poems I have read. you have to post more quickly I am waiting to read them so all I can say is MORE PLEASE!!!!
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:27:00 AM
Wow
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:41:00 AM
is it good?
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