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It Ended With A Kiss
Marie, an oldie who'd never been kissed Longed for the feeling of kissing on lips One day she went selling kisses for free Men were put off for Marie was gummy She'd lost her teeth guzzling too many sweets Then had regretted indulging in treats. Suddenly a cool, handsome guy passed by The oldie gave him a wink from her eye He knew what she wanted and came up trumps Gave her a kiss and found Marie stunk He was disgusted and said she should pay She paid happily as he'd made her day. The dear sweet Marie has since passed away This is what her epitaph has to say "Here lies a woman merrily at rest Her last day on earth was simply the best That day she’d known the magic of a kiss Twas worth every penny of fifty quid."
14th May 2022
If wishes were kisses life would be bliss, everyone would be blessed with lucky lips. Quote - Poet’s own

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Date: 5/31/2022 1:38:00 PM
A "Fun/Creative" write. More kisses for all. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:11:00 PM
Thank you Paula, bless your poets pen and enjoy the day too… Belle
Date: 5/28/2022 6:23:00 PM
I adore how you put this together, Belle. From beginning to end! Such creative and humorous writing, not to mention how adorable it is.
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Date: 5/29/2022 1:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Sotto, you’ve made my day… Belle
Date: 5/22/2022 2:19:00 AM
Hi Belle! A unique write, indeed. I haven’t been around for a few days. Wishing you and your husband well. Pangie.
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Date: 5/25/2022 6:16:00 PM
Hi Pangie, thank you very much and I wish you well too… Belle
Date: 5/20/2022 5:02:00 AM
WoW! Belle, I enjoyed this story from start to finish. It’s sad she lived her whole life without being kissed. I’m glad she one in the end. Well done. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/25/2022 6:15:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, pleased you enjoyed the read… Have a nice day yourself… Belle :-)
Date: 5/18/2022 10:16:00 PM
She's lucky. I would not have touched her before she a bath.
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Date: 5/19/2022 7:47:00 PM
Thank you Victor, she was very lucky seeing that she was yucky… Belle
Date: 5/18/2022 4:53:00 PM
They say you can't take it with you, so at least she got to spend it on fulfilling her final wish. Fun story telling, Belle ~ John
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Date: 5/18/2022 7:51:00 PM
Thank you John, it was money well spent to fly off content… Belle
Date: 5/18/2022 1:14:00 PM
A sweet story, am glad Marie got her kiss at last :)
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Date: 5/18/2022 7:45:00 PM
Thank you Michelle, a least Marie got to enjoy the thrill of a kiss… Belle -:)
Date: 5/17/2022 8:52:00 AM
Yes, we should do our best to not make someone unhappy. However...don't think I'd have kissed Marie on the lips. A hug maybe?
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Date: 5/17/2022 4:40:00 PM
Ha, neither would I Ann, at least Marie got to kiss a guy afore she flew to that beautiful place beyond the sky… Thank you, Belle
Date: 5/15/2022 12:39:00 PM
So much for inflation! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 5/16/2022 4:55:00 PM
Ha, a costly kiss but worth it. Thank you Rico… Belle
Date: 5/15/2022 3:25:00 AM
Absolutely love this Belle from beginning to end! So cleverly written and so cute and funny!! Debx
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Date: 5/16/2022 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Deb, so pleased you enjoyed the read… Belle
Date: 5/14/2022 2:49:00 PM
Hello Belle, Maria dided a happy woman. Because she gother kiss. Hugs.
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Date: 5/15/2022 4:29:00 PM
Hello Belle, you are welcome . Hugs.
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Date: 5/14/2022 3:00:00 PM
Died happy Marie surely did. Thank you Darlene… Hugs returned… Belle