It Brings Me Joy

To my best recollection, I was four: when I built a fort from pine slabs Dad bought; I recall I somehow forgot a door. I found myself sitting there, feeling caught in a trap I inadvertently sprung; eating the sap oozing from every knot. It's hard to believe I was once that young, and yet, I still taste that piney, sweet taste, time indelibly inked upon my tongue. In my innocence, the whole world seemed chaste and I felt free to simply be a boy: a feeling that the years could not erase. Whenever the pressures of life annoy, I think of those days, and it brings me joy.
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Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Very sweet and sentimental Emile. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Pinet Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:36 AM
A cool write! Congratulations, Emile, in 1st place!
Pinet Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 1:09 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this excellent and engaging poem, love the image too _Constance
Pinet Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Agustin Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 10:42 PM
Wow! Congrats! Indeed, special childhood memory brings joy. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Pinet Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:04 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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November 28, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Very nice! expertly done! congrats on your top win!!
Pinet Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Krish, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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