It Begins At Belonging

So it begins.., somewhere 
it always must. Right?

Just picturing Dorothy starting out.., followin' Billie Burke's yellow brick road,
on a cause..
                  with bewitched ruby shoes. 
many munchkins encouraging entourage in song..
a crushed one lost.

She was alone then, mostly, accept for Toto only 
 embarking on a journey to Oz...

Don't ya see? 
                    It was belonging they both tried to find.. 

That winding road's spiral'd beginning
that's it 
that's what it's like..

Blowin' dandelions at an age before
as ages go, seeds on the wind
before the scary sounds, the cries..
who's to blame?

Waiting your turn, soon to rush headlong
her bracelet still hanging on
a battle of bullets and longing
where a hallowed enemy waits...
all shredded waves
now gone
a bracelet worn too, he..
from her., just as you.

It was belonging they tried to find, 
both of them.., could've been best friends
before war's indifference.. 
so glad once.., yet the same
oh, don't ya see?
who's to blame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/4/2023 6:28:00 AM
Ahh, yes my friend-- who is to blame? This world throws so much at us and we react to that massive onslaught. A most profound poem! A fav for me.. God bless..
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Date: 7/31/2023 6:23:00 PM
Important thoughts to share here. Belonging something we all wish for. Belonging leads to feeling needed which leads to self Love. Regards David in NZ Now 4 years cancer free.
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Date: 7/19/2023 8:39:00 PM
Sure profound one. I loved the allusions made by the mention of Dorothy in OZ
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Date: 7/15/2023 2:53:00 AM
I love the easy flow of this and mesmerized to the very end. Richard, You may well ask: "Who's to blame ..."
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