It Ain'T My Fault!

It all began with Adam and Eve and that wily snake!
Eve was tempted and ate the fruit - that was the first mistake!
Adam was right there at her side and took a generous bite as well.
"'Tis Thy fault, Lord! 'Twas the gal Thou gavest me!" he was quick to tell!

Thus the blame game and "it ain't my fault" stratagems began,
Causing consternation with each generation since the genesis of man!
We tend to blame everyone and everything for the problems we create,
Even blaming Burger King and Pizza Hut for being overweight!

Moms' and dads' and their wayward offspring without fail,
Blame society for their kids offenses and ending up in jail!
Dad blames his boss when he's passed over for promotion.
Could it be that he lacked ***** and on-the-job devotion?

Wily politicians blame the other party when things don't go right.
Voters blame the other feller for electing fools adding to our plight!
The President blames The Congress for not supporting his schemes.
The Congress blames The President for most everything it seems!

Ain't it time we stood up and took responsibility for our actions,
And stop blaming everyone and everything for our dumb infractions?
Lord, I pray that I be among the very first to bring about a halt,
To the finger pointing and proclaiming, "Well, it ain't my fault!"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved

Placed No. 2 in Catie Lindsey's "Outrageous Rhyme" Contest - October 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/17/2010 9:04:00 AM
I had to revisit this one. This should be mandatory reading every where in the world
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Date: 10/20/2010 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Outrageous Rhyme". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2010 5:35:00 PM
You tell 'um Robbie!!!! grrrrrr Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/2/2010 4:39:00 PM
Awesome writing Robert, Congrats on your well deserved win in Catie's contest. Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/2/2010 7:22:00 AM
I was sure this would end up a winner....and indeed it is! well done, Robert! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/2/2010 7:05:00 AM
Many congratulations Robert on your fine win in Catie's contest. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on this well derserved win in the contest, Bob
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:47:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your super big win in Catie's contest.. another awesome poem and victory my friend.. enjoy this happy weekend... with luv..
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:21:00 AM
true indeed. Love and concur with every line
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Date: 9/29/2010 3:27:00 PM
Hi Robert.Very very true! I loved this.I can see your sense of humour and yet you convey a serious message.Same here in England along with the "let's sue " that has gripped our nation to the point of ridicule so now everything has to be 'politically correct' Still-a very enjoyable poem. Luv June
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:37:00 PM
A rousing retell of the age old story of how it all began.. and u really sock it to the reader with your last two verses luv.. great piece as always with impeccable rhyme scheme ... now hold onto this one..maybe will have another Adam and Eve contest ..haha.. enjoyed my friend..
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:11:00 PM
GOOD ONE, and best of luck in that contest. I went to see my soupmail .Maybe you had not finished the letter yet. I will check once more and then I have to get off here. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/28/2010 8:33:00 AM
Those word we hear much toooo often!!! It ain't my fault!! What a great entry to Catie's contest this is!!! Well done!
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Date: 9/28/2010 7:21:00 AM
Bob, I just love this.. So much truth and it only takes one person to take responsibility, maybe just maybe the others will follow the example.. Good luck for the contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 9/27/2010 7:58:00 PM
Excellent entry, my friend. Really enjoyed. Good luck and thanks for reading my silliness. You guys have a great week. Ralphie
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Date: 9/27/2010 3:51:00 PM
This is amazing Bob, and very outrageous! Enjoyed your contest entry. Good luck in the contest. By the way lol, i accidently posted to contest. One is to crazy for you, and the other is whatever poem goes. Catie's contest is a nice selection of contest. You know me a bit to crazy. Have a nice one Bob H. God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:03:00 PM
Definitely a winner, Robert! Fault is passed around faster than a hot potato. Enjoyed your rhyme. Diane
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:40:00 PM
Glad you're entering this one, Bob!!
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:25:00 PM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Bob. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:19:00 PM
BRAVO!!!!! Well said my friend.. great entry for contest, a winner hands down...Best of luck Michael
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:37:00 AM
So true! Loved it.
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:18:00 AM
LOL FUNNY ONE, I LIKE THAT "WELL, IT AIN'T MY FAULT", A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ BOB! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:09:00 AM
love it, if for the contest , good luck
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:09:00 AM
The "blame game" really needs to stop, Bob. When ever something bad happens, it's always someone else's fault. We need to examine our own lives and find the truth. You hit the target with this one and I hope you're entering it in the Outrageous Rhyme contest! A winner for sure. Love, Carolyn
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