It

It grows
beneath the surface
It grows
Behind the curtain

It grows
And when it is seen
It’s too late
It’s there to stay

It is like a gas
Hovering 
Following
Enveloping those

In its Smokey tendrils
Entrapping 
Clinging like brambles
To clothes

It coils itself
Around 
Tighter and tighter
It sits

By the ear
And hisses
Cruel music
To those unaware

Invisible It follows
Infecting the world
With its murky gloom
Making the future black

The world stops turning
Reverts to standing still
And it clings still
Holding in an unloving embrace

It’s like an impenetrable bubble 
Of pain
Hatred reverberating back inside
While kindness sits beyond its walls

Kindness does not wait
It sits for only a while
Then leaves
Leaves you with it

Clawing for freedom
Does not work
For it infects deep
It becomes you

Escape can only come
From the outside
But the world is blind to it
So we sit

Afraid to make a sound
And it grows bigger
‘Tell there is no telling
The difference between you

And it

Until suddenly 
It Fades
Gone for good?
Not likely 

It always returns
It’s just away
Visiting family
Or taking a break

But it’s enough
Long enough
Long enough to speak
Long enough for the world to hear you

Long enough to be ready
When it comes back
Maybe you won’t be unarmed
Maybe you won’t be alone

But only if you speak
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 5/22/2020 1:26:00 PM
Very thought-provoking, Jaycee. A Fav Poem for me. ~Mark
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Date: 11/25/2017 8:23:00 PM
Nice imagery, Jaycee. Some poems are meant to be convoluted and mysterious. Sometimes they take a life of their own, different from what we intended to be. This one was a pleasant read.
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Date: 10/23/2017 8:19:00 AM
Hi Jaycee, welcome to PS. If I may be so bold the best way to learn to write better is to read. Read different poems from different poets. Note what the forms are that they use and learn the ones you like through the Forms link. Decide why you are writing and what you get out of it, and write for yourself. If you have questions, ask and lastly, don't be too self judgemental, the poems you write that you think are your worst can often touch someone profoundly. Good luck.
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Date: 10/17/2017 5:49:00 PM
I found this poem deep meaning i did not understanding your poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/17/2017 4:48:00 PM
I don't think you went too sad, you went deep and dark impacting enough to better embrace your light at the end. Excellent pen :) xomo
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Date: 10/17/2017 4:16:00 PM
I wrote this poem and I totally wanted it to be more positive. I wanted it to be a message of "It all gets better" but it may be a little sadder than I originally planned. Let me know what you think, I am curious and would love to improve my writing. :) ;)
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