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It grows beneath the surface It grows Behind the curtain It grows And when it is seen It’s too late It’s there to stay It is like a gas Hovering Following Enveloping those In its Smokey tendrils Entrapping Clinging like brambles To clothes It coils itself Around Tighter and tighter It sits By the ear And hisses Cruel music To those unaware Invisible It follows Infecting the world With its murky gloom Making the future black The world stops turning Reverts to standing still And it clings still Holding in an unloving embrace It’s like an impenetrable bubble Of pain Hatred reverberating back inside While kindness sits beyond its walls Kindness does not wait It sits for only a while Then leaves Leaves you with it Clawing for freedom Does not work For it infects deep It becomes you Escape can only come From the outside But the world is blind to it So we sit Afraid to make a sound And it grows bigger ‘Tell there is no telling The difference between you And it Until suddenly It Fades Gone for good? Not likely It always returns It’s just away Visiting family Or taking a break But it’s enough Long enough Long enough to speak Long enough for the world to hear you Long enough to be ready When it comes back Maybe you won’t be unarmed Maybe you won’t be alone But only if you speak

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/22/2020 1:26:00 PM
Very thought-provoking, Jaycee. A Fav Poem for me. ~Mark
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Date: 11/25/2017 8:23:00 PM
Nice imagery, Jaycee. Some poems are meant to be convoluted and mysterious. Sometimes they take a life of their own, different from what we intended to be. This one was a pleasant read.
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Date: 10/23/2017 8:19:00 AM
Hi Jaycee, welcome to PS. If I may be so bold the best way to learn to write better is to read. Read different poems from different poets. Note what the forms are that they use and learn the ones you like through the Forms link. Decide why you are writing and what you get out of it, and write for yourself. If you have questions, ask and lastly, don't be too self judgemental, the poems you write that you think are your worst can often touch someone profoundly. Good luck.
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Date: 10/17/2017 5:49:00 PM
I found this poem deep meaning i did not understanding your poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/17/2017 4:48:00 PM
I don't think you went too sad, you went deep and dark impacting enough to better embrace your light at the end. Excellent pen :) xomo
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Date: 10/17/2017 4:16:00 PM
I wrote this poem and I totally wanted it to be more positive. I wanted it to be a message of "It all gets better" but it may be a little sadder than I originally planned. Let me know what you think, I am curious and would love to improve my writing. :) ;)
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